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63 - En Prise

Sep 29, 2010 11:25

Title: En Prise
Characters: Russia/America
Rating: R, for sex.
Summary: 1972 - Fischer seals his lead against Soviet player Spassky in the Match of the Century, and Russia gives America an impromptu chess lesson.

TCE is co-written by wizzard890 and pyrrhiccomedy.

( The horses. )

from the ministry of plenty

Comments 108

rissa_ichigo September 30 2010, 02:38:18 UTC

OKLSNDGKADSBKFGADSKGS!!!!!!!!

This was....fruk man. I giggled so much at this chapter though! And it was SOOO adorable how America laughed at Russia's question after he got his breath back. XD Oh man! I'm kinda hoping for the checkers match. XD I love that game!

Thanks you guys. You engraved most of the rules of chess into my mind from this. X3

pyrrhiccomedy September 30 2010, 09:40:16 UTC

You engraved most of the rules of chess into my mind from this. X3

I wish I could say I hadn't already forgotten most of them. XD

quasiarti September 30 2010, 03:39:01 UTC

............................you know what's the funny par?....in spanish the Knights are actually called Horses (Caballo) 8'D

pyrrhiccomedy September 30 2010, 09:43:54 UTC

It turns out that's also the case in Russian. XD

quasiarti September 30 2010, 10:33:39 UTC

hahaha oh dear X'D, America could a find a defend of that then X'DDD

tinediserp September 30 2010, 07:53:01 UTC

So, goddamn, this whole thing was made of win and what everyone else has said and HERE HAVE SOME FLAIL TOO AF;BOIRG;AAJ &hearts

But - my favorite part was totally

Then: "I guess the two sides are kind of like an army--I mean two armies--with the knights and castles and stuff?"

It took Russia a moment to realize that America had never made that connection before.

AMERICA WHY ARE YOU SO FUCKING ADORABLE?! 

pyrrhiccomedy September 30 2010, 11:57:13 UTC

We're so thrilled you liked it, thank you! ♥

AMERICA WHY ARE YOU SO FUCKING ADORABLE?!

I DON'T KNOW MAN HE JUST HAPPENED THIS WAY.

lokichan2004 September 30 2010, 08:43:59 UTC

I might just be interested in watching chess now, because of you two. And whenever I do, I'll think fondly of this chapter, and smile. :D So hot. And so very like them, too, to be snarky and sweet during sex.

I'm going to be so so sad when this story is over. What will fill the void when you guys are done? D:

pyrrhiccomedy September 30 2010, 11:59:41 UTC

Chess is always gonna be a little hotter for me now having helped write this, I'm not gonna lie. XD

I'm going to be so so sad when this story is over. What will fill the void when you guys are done? D:

There are lots of really talented writers who are writing for R/A! Your hearts will go on. =D

erueru_2d September 30 2010, 11:03:37 UTC

Football belongs to England.
Mahjong belongs to China.
Hockey belongs to Canada (or does it?)
AND THE XX CENTURY CHESS BELONGS TO SOVIET RUSSIA, DAMNIT.
So.
Now I know that this was exactly when Russia "lost" Cold War, and nothing would convince me otherwise. First playing like a drugged person, then resigning... OH SHIT WHY DID IT HAPPEN.

Having said that, I also would like to add that I non-patriotically laughed my ass off at upset!Russia. I don't know, there's something very cute about his reactions. And about his teaching methods, as well. Hell, this whole chapter was adorable and funny and then OMG SO HOT and then funny again, and I can't help but smiling even 1 hour after I finished reading, even though the chess was an extremely SERIOUS BUSINESS.

there is a no communist propaganda in the bedroom rule, starting right now

What, do you mean he has been talking about Marxist-Leninist system in the bedroom before?
Ohmygosh, is he devoted or what. XD

The sweet jump of America's throat beneath Russia's palm made his heart flutter ( ... )

wizzard890 September 30 2010, 21:29:51 UTC

AND THE XX CENTURY CHESS BELONGS TO SOVIET RUSSIA, DAMNIT.

He agrees with you. So much.

I also would like to add that I non-patriotically laughed my ass off at upset!Russia. I don't know, there's something very cute about his reactions.

His response to this sentiment is something like: "Why does everyone keep saying I was cute? I was in distress! CHESS IS A SERIOUS GAME FOR SERIOUS PEOPLE AND AMERICA IS NOT A SERIOUS PERSON AND IT WAS A FAIR WIN BUT THAT DOESN'T MAKE IT RIGHT."

What, do you mean he has been talking about Marxist-Leninist system in the bedroom before? Ohmygosh, is he devoted or what.

Communism is not an ideaology. Communism is a lifestyle. XD

You know, the whole porn scene reveals something like a completely new kind of love.

Yeah, absolutely. They're in a different place in their relationship. I think their feelings for one another have really matured, and it shows. They're so relaxed around one another, and so grown up, for all the teasing and bitching and putting things in their mouths that don't really go