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[theburialplot]

don't swerve. i'll stand here till my mouth is a crack in your windshield. i'll carve out a map of my secrets concealed. i am an open book, judged by my trash covered content. a novel idea about my best of times spent. so stop the hot presses and tape this headline on your story. "forgotten word-weaver raped of his glory." they were the hot

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[beatmeouttame77]

man, i wish i could write.

We're finally going to have some shows up here. January 22nd we have one up in Carthage. and then i guess we might have one with your band in a battle of the bands in jan. if we're able to get in which i hope everything works out with that, and then we have one up here again sometime in feb.

[beatmeouttame77]

sounds good. id also like to get you guys up here to play sometime. cause the music scene up here is pretty pathetic.

[theburialplot]

alas, i think said the sparrow is dead.

[dani5248]

hm...i think i figured out what this one is about.
im so proud.
love you lots dude. i liked this one a lot...just like the other ones.

xoxo.
pretty eyes.

[_doctordoctor_]

Er..give me some of your writing talent.
Or ill poke your eyes out.
=D

[_doctordoctor_]

err, yeah right.
you're really good.
you should see some stuff i wrote.
they suck.

& i only poke eyes balls if necessary.
=]

[agreeing_echoes]

"the sunshine sat on my body and threw a skin cancer party."

That's such a cynical take on sunshine, and I love it.
...oh what it is to be clever.
<3
Sharon

dude you can write really good

[anonymous]

hey eli. your stuff is pretty awesome. i wish i could write as good as you. your stuff is really deep. i give you props reggin :) bye bye