LJ Idol "Turtles All the Way Down"

Jul 24, 2012 11:37


A young father watched his daughter sleep, feeling that deep, complete sensation wash over him. Listening to her quiet breathing and the smack of her lips, he watched the way her arm tensed, found her lovie, and relaxed. There was peace in this place. It flickered in the night light.

His gaze fell to the metallic globe he had placed on her bedside ( Read more... )

n3m3sis42, lj idol

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stucking_foned July 24 2012, 16:19:41 UTC
that was really good

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thehobbit July 25 2012, 02:52:41 UTC
Thanks ma'am.

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silbyeatsrazors July 24 2012, 18:09:03 UTC
Is this from somebody's journal? A book? Your own words? I must know! I need to read all of it.

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thehobbit July 25 2012, 02:54:03 UTC
THIS IS MINE! I wrote it for n3m3sis42 and LJ Idol. Where hopefully all the people will vote for us and then we'll win all the things!

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silbyeatsrazors August 23 2012, 16:27:13 UTC
It's really great! I know your time is all taken up by babies, but you should definitely write when you have time. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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n3m3sis42 July 24 2012, 18:53:01 UTC
I love this. Seriously, you need to do Idol next season. Thank you so much for being my Champion this week! <3

Also, I just noticed I have my own tag now! I feel so special.

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thehobbit July 25 2012, 02:54:58 UTC
You do in fact has a tag! And hopefully my children will let me do it. Dear Children, Mommy has to write! GO AWAY. I love you...

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lyricmaniac July 24 2012, 19:35:34 UTC
Another great champion piece. Well done! Like n3 said, you should consider doing idol next time around. :)

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thehobbit July 25 2012, 02:55:32 UTC
I have twins who are under two. If I can convince their father to be a helper monkey we will see.

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nateasir July 24 2012, 20:36:21 UTC
Great read :)

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thehobbit July 25 2012, 02:56:11 UTC
Thanks.

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