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[thirdonebetween]

in the shadows of tall buildings.
kangin/eeteuk.
pg-13; 1,885 words.
(☆)

Comments

[thirdonebetween]

thank you so much. ♥

(and, sorry of the other comment - apparently I can't type or sign in correctly. ^^;)

[oulan]

Oh wow. I really liked it.
Very touching and emotional.

[thirdonebetween]

thank you~ ♥ I'm glad you liked it.

[pieces]

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Omg. I remember this one now. ToT

And and and and you ended it so beautifully and omgggg Becky for all the angst it's so gorgeous and I love it and alhdfitye4r95aqywtriaysrvgabssklfhasoiifhasdf.

How would you like my soul sent to you again?

[thirdonebetween]

no need. 8] I already have it.

[pieces]

Right. Um. What something else then?

First born child? Pretty diamond ring??? Something?

8D;;;;

[pieces]

Also. I can't stop reading this. You suck. 8|

When you write stories, I write novels in response.

[magnolium]

When I first saw this on my flist, I was tentative to click when I first read the pairing, because I hate KangTeuk. But then I saw that it was you who wrote it, so I read it without a second thought. And I didn't regret it one second.

Your stories are always so simply written, but with this level of rawness and reality melting off the edges. You don't ever need to use descriptive words, because the way you use the English language makes up for that. This is definitely the best and most beautiful KangTeuk I've ever read.

I love it. I love you. ♥ If you ever stop writing, I'll stab you.

Re: When you write stories, I write novels in response.

[thirdonebetween]

is that a threat? D;

naw, I'm kidding. I'm so glad you gave it a chance even though you're not a fan of the pairing - it means that much more that you liked it, then. :] it's been so long since I've written (well, finished) something; I wasn't sure if anyone would even remember me. XD

I'm so glad you liked it. ♥ thanks so much for the wonderful comment, too.

[beneath_the_sky]

honey, you broke my heart.

[thirdonebetween]

I'm sorry. :/ I didn't mean to.

I have some superglue if you'd like it? ♥

[beneath_the_sky]

i never gave a proper comment, did i?

i loved how the story seemed so fragile. i don't know if that made sense, but the way you told the whole thing is so light even if the topic is of chronic disease. its just heartbreaking really. like how people sometimes try to handle things so lightly to alleviate the impact of something? that's how it is with your piece. i had the feeling of that all throughout and it fit in so perfectly! it tugs the heartstring. i also loved the fact that your imagery gave off such a light, easy vibe and yet the story is laden with emotion.

and oh the glue will work wonders.

you are very much welcome to break it again.