(i'm so sorry this is turning into an essay but i really like discussing stories that i like ; A ;)
oh and there's something that bothered me. around the time after kyungsoo decided he was going to get hitched to the choi princess to save his kingdom, kyungsoo and jongin slept together. i get that there was some unresolved sexual tension (bc jongin in white is <3) between the two, but kyungsoo was painted as a cautious, careful, calculating ruler. despite whatever whirlwind of feelings he has in his system, or no matter the advances from jongin's part, i didn't see him as the type to overstep his boundaries, especially committing something that could've jeopardized his potential alliance to the choi kingdom. so it sort of threw me of when he decided to make love with jongin in the story. maybe some transitioning between the sudden engagement and the kaisoo!smexytimes would've smoothed that out... that's just me though and i love you and your fic. but really, i just find kyungsoo's sudden decision to be wild and young and free (
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oh my gosh so much to reply to ;o; i hope i do my best to answer all your questions!
- the whole "in another world" scene was actually... hmm, addressed right after? is that the right word for it lol but kyungsoo says, "I don't think so.... Maybe we were destined to always be together but not"- he looks down at their intertwined fingers and swallows thickly -"together." which meant that, no matter who they are, where they are, what they are, they will always be together but apart ;_; /weeps/ that was actually one of my fave parts to write simply because it broke my heart
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TEARS MY HEART i thought it was going to be happy but nOPE I love kyungsoo's characterization here though ;_;
oh and if you dont mind me asking- what's the word limit for a post? as in, how do you know where to cut off? (like how you divided this fic into two) :/
aww, i'm sorry T_T yeah, no happy ending this time /sighs i believe the word limit tends to be around 8,000 words? ;o; it really depends on the html though because there's actually a html limit, not a word limit lol personally, if i know my fic is going to go over 8,000, i pre-plan where i want to break it up :) like i usually plan fics by scenes first so as i did this one i was like "okay it looks like a pretty good break at scene eight" so yeah ^^ thank you for reading!
"And they all live happily ever after?" Jongin asks, staring up at Kyungsoo expectantly. Kyungsoo swallows hard and just smiles.
"And the king is happy to be with the prince," Kyungsoo whispers
you don't know how much i bawled at this part of kyungsoo's story :(( you can feel how hopeful jongin is at the same time you can feel the internal battle kyungsoo has going on between reality and his deepest fantasy ;w;
i already expected a sad ending coz i know how this kind of au works but it never really prepared me for the pain :((
you know that i'm a sucker for kaisoo fluff but you don't know (or i think you do....?) about my love and obsession over angst haha
nice story amy!! you never disappoint <3 <3
P.S. i miss talking to you :<< but go do whatever you have to do..FIGHTING!!! <3
apryll!! i miss you too dearest ;; i'm sorry T_T lol i know you like angst dearest ahuhuhuhuhu i don't like reading angst quite as much as i enjoy writing it tbh :) thank you so much!! <3
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/ugly sobs/
i love how you ended this and how it goes back to the beginning and
this is beautiful and i have to add you i already did
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thank you so much for reading :D
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i was fooled; i thought all was going to end up happy
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oh and there's something that bothered me. around the time after kyungsoo decided he was going to get hitched to the choi princess to save his kingdom, kyungsoo and jongin slept together. i get that there was some unresolved sexual tension (bc jongin in white is <3) between the two, but kyungsoo was painted as a cautious, careful, calculating ruler. despite whatever whirlwind of feelings he has in his system, or no matter the advances from jongin's part, i didn't see him as the type to overstep his boundaries, especially committing something that could've jeopardized his potential alliance to the choi kingdom. so it sort of threw me of when he decided to make love with jongin in the story. maybe some transitioning between the sudden engagement and the kaisoo!smexytimes would've smoothed that out... that's just me though and i love you and your fic. but really, i just find kyungsoo's sudden decision to be wild and young and free ( ( ... )
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- the whole "in another world" scene was actually... hmm, addressed right after? is that the right word for it lol but kyungsoo says, "I don't think so.... Maybe we were destined to always be together but not"- he looks down at their intertwined fingers and swallows thickly -"together." which meant that, no matter who they are, where they are, what they are, they will always be together but apart ;_; /weeps/ that was actually one of my fave parts to write simply because it broke my heart ( ... )
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i thought it was going to be happy but nOPE
I love kyungsoo's characterization here though ;_;
oh and if you dont mind me asking- what's the word limit for a post? as in, how do you know where to cut off? (like how you divided this fic into two)
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i believe the word limit tends to be around 8,000 words? ;o; it really depends on the html though because there's actually a html limit, not a word limit lol
personally, if i know my fic is going to go over 8,000, i pre-plan where i want to break it up :) like i usually plan fics by scenes first so as i did this one i was like "okay it looks like a pretty good break at scene eight" so yeah ^^
thank you for reading!
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"And they all live happily ever after?" Jongin asks, staring up at Kyungsoo expectantly. Kyungsoo swallows hard and just smiles.
"And the king is happy to be with the prince," Kyungsoo whispers
you don't know how much i bawled at this part of kyungsoo's story :(( you can feel how hopeful jongin is at the same time you can feel the internal battle kyungsoo has going on between reality and his deepest fantasy ;w;
i already expected a sad ending coz i know how this kind of au works but it never really prepared me for the pain :((
you know that i'm a sucker for kaisoo fluff but you don't know (or i think you do....?) about my love and obsession over angst haha
nice story amy!! you never disappoint <3 <3
P.S. i miss talking to you :<< but go do whatever you have to do..FIGHTING!!! <3
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i'm sorry T_T
lol i know you like angst dearest ahuhuhuhuhu i don't like reading angst quite as much as i enjoy writing it tbh :)
thank you so much!! <3
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