Past, Present & Future, Chapter 8

Jun 16, 2011 15:20

Title: Past, Present & Future
Author: trieze0713
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong, Yoochun/Junsu
Length: Chaptered
Genres: AU, Drama, Angst, Romance
Rating: PG

(Prologue) (Chapter 1) (Chapter 2) (Chapter 3) (Chapter 4) (Chapter 5) (Chapter 6) (Chapter 7)

Chapter 8: Of Being a Parent & A Child

It’s at times like today that he wished he had more trust ( Read more... )

past present & future, fanfic, yunjae

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chloe1910 June 18 2011, 05:11:18 UTC
Moonbin is lucky that the one who found him is Yunho cause Yunh is such an amazing father and person.

I hope the discussion is going to turn out ok.

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trieze0713 July 1 2011, 11:07:10 UTC
I wish I have a father like Yunho too LOL

Discussion turned out OK, but not for the next YunJae's encounter T___T Thanks for being patient, chapter 9 is up. I hope you're still interested in reading it :)

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Hand Me The Bucket Again!!!! falcon2339 June 18 2011, 13:02:35 UTC
I am really glad that you breezed through YH's angioplasty. I honestly thought you are going to have YH reminiscing into the past, making it draggy. Phew! I am glad too that you gave us an insight into CM's past,thus explaining why he is like what he is now. Good job!!! (seriously, you should consider publishing your work!!!!). I am dying to know what YH is going to do next besides accepting the scholarship and what JJ will do to try to get back into his heart. I still didn't like the fact the JJ doesn't care a bit about MB. It is hard not to like such a sweet and considerate kid. Basically, I think JJ is just plain jealous of MB. I am salivating again for more, especially looking forward to them meeting the second time. Hand me the bucket again!!!! Thanks for putting your effort into this. Love it!!!!

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Re: Hand Me The Bucket Again!!!! trieze0713 July 1 2011, 11:09:19 UTC
Your comment always made me blush dear :) But thanks a lot, you're one of the readers that I'm looking forward for the comments in each chapter. I hope you will keep reading and let me know what you think about Chapter 9, just updated it.

Love your comment too, thanks a lot!! I'm so inspired to make a twist here and there because of your comments! LOL

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skyp3 June 18 2011, 17:35:59 UTC
yunho is strong..really strong..hope he can survive
thank you

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trieze0713 July 1 2011, 11:04:13 UTC
He will survive indeed :) Thank you for your comment, please read the updated chapter as well when you have time :D

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crystaldee June 18 2011, 19:42:05 UTC
Yeah...maybe Yun is a good father...but I doubt that he's a good lover...no wonder Jae got frustrated back then...
Yun should've told the truth back then if he really love Jae, not relaying on their "trust/love". Both of you are not mind reader. Duh...

Waiting for the next part ^___^

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trieze0713 July 1 2011, 11:02:05 UTC
No one is perfect Dee ;)

Next part is up! Hope it's to your liking... or not :p Thanks bb, enjoy your weekend!

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crossing_by June 20 2011, 07:30:05 UTC
and with that my dear friend ... i need the next chapter
i think the same with the story line ... quite slow ... or me just being way too eager to read the complete story hehe

anyway, hopefully jae dont messed up this time

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trieze0713 July 1 2011, 10:54:18 UTC
If he messed up, please don't strangle me in our next encounter the way I want to strangle Jae! ROFL

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