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May 7th, entry twenty-three
I'm closing the Butcher's shop.
[A pause. That's not news, so he'll amend it.] For good this time. The rest've the orders I got'll be finished up, but then that's it. There's another shop down the bazaar, if anyone needs shit. It ain't as good, but don't be picky ( Read more... ) -
Feb. 9th, entry twenty-two
Anyone lose a rabbit?
It's scrawny, got white fur, and talks. The thing's a little ruffled from where Boy caught it, but he's fine. [Well, 'a little ruffled' might be an understatement.] If it ain't anyones, I'll just find a place for it. Don't really mind the thing, anyway. -
[Memory Broadcast]
[The radio clicks on, beginning to broadcast a young boy speaking. His voice his hgh-pitched, clearly prepubescent, but it's impossible to miss the sheer emotion in his tone: There's a lot of anger there.]
--That was the day my mom died here. They called it an accident.... but it wasn't. I saw the whole thing... [The boy suddenly seems to have a ( Read more... ) -
Radio Transmission
[the radio cuts on midway though a conversation: The sounds of the bustling marketplace are audible in the background, though shortly thereafter Paladin can be heard speaking.]
"--think it best when the haft is just thick enough that my fingers can't quite touch when wrapped around it."
[After a moment, Castor responds.] "Guess so, but you don't ( Read more... ) -
Dec. 30th, entry twenty-one
Stupid question: What day's it? -
Nov. 23rd, entry nineteen
Wolf, if you can work some extra hours, I'll make sure you get paid for it. Let me know if you've got time.
Butcher's shop ain't gonna be running deliveries for a bit. Pickups only 'til we can work otherwise. If you got a problem with that, come talk to me.
[A pause as he considers adding more, before deciding otherwise.] ...That's all.