(the dust of ages) chapter six: dirty business

[unfinishedline]

Title: The Dust of Ages
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire. Written for eowyn_girl.
Rating: R for themes, language, some adult situations. But mostly themes.
Status: 6/15. I’ve written the whole thing already, and will try to update daily.
Summary: Peter and Claire were both caught up in this crazy, never-ending circle a long time ago. The real question

Comments

[joanna_484]

Well, I guess if I don’t like Peter’s new haircut, at least Claire should get some enjoyment out of it *sigh* (Just kidding! *lol*) And I like the “ego problem” line :D

“…just to see Danny’s chubby cheeks bunch up and hear the throaty baby chuckle that exploded out of him.” This phrase perfectly describes a baby laughing *lol* I love it :) And your description of Nathan’s and especially Peter’s interaction with Danny is so loving :)

I wouldn't want Noah on my bad side! Poor Peter! I hope he (and we) find out what's happening soon :) Great chapter :)

[sinverguenza]

oh, yes, noah scares me. not as much as angela petrelli *wibble* but yeah. id want him on my good side too!

and sorry about peter's hair :( i like it longer too!

[nayden]

"I know you grit your teeth when you come” ......

oh yea you've killed me again hun *thud* super, super update, loved it *hugs*

[sinverguenza]

hee, glad you liked it ;)

[iamlillykane]

OH MY GOD. *speechless* i guess i should go in order, right.

first of all, you cut peter's hair?!?

second. OMG.

i can't say that i didn't think it was peter. but. JEESE. you've blown me away.

AGAIN.

[sinverguenza]

i'm so glad you liked it! thanks for reviewing!

[moonlitpines]

*runs in circles*

This is the best series I've read in years. Can't wait to read more!!

[sinverguenza]

yay, im gla dyoure enjoying it that much. thanks for the review <3

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

Eee! Love it. This is SO great. And I loved this part:

Danny’s eyes would always widen with pleasure when he saw Peter. His feet would excitedly stamp up and down and his hands would rise, asking to be picked up. That was just so sweet and adorable I almost melted into a puddle. ^_^

Man, it's a good thing you're posting these every day, otherwise I'd be losing my mind with suspense.

[sinverguenza]

lol, i dont do gooshy mushy scenes too well, so im glad you found that part sweet! and yeah, daily updates are nice for both parties, hee.