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urazuki

547 SERVICE / The Game (Part 3)

Jul 06, 2012 15:44

Title: The Game (Chapter 3)
Fandom: 547 SERVICE
Characters: Ryo x ひとみ
Genre: General
Table: One
Prompt: 022. Beggar
Word Count: 1111
Rating: R
Summary: The rules of The Game were very simple.
Author's Notes: Part One | Part Two.

( Prove that you're not afraid of me. )

series, kaine, 100_situations, 547 service

Comments 3

the_germangirl July 7 2012, 14:54:03 UTC

Brilliant :D Bet he's happy with his progress :p Just one thing to point out..the sentence "the professor suddenly averted his bespectacled gaze back at her." I'd switch averted, just because it usually relates to removing your gaze of someone, not something, like you're implying :) Just a thought :) Can't wait to read more! Thanks for posting!

urazuki July 8 2012, 04:54:31 UTC

oh thanks for the heads up! will change it! ^^;

the_germangirl January 7 2013, 16:10:21 UTC

Hey, hope you're doing well :) Happy New Year!