Comments | vicshi: [one-shot] Emotional Surprise

vicshi

[one-shot] Emotional Surprise

Aug 03, 2010 10:53

my first time writing, comments highly appreciated :)

for chepii for being so wonderful

( “Stupid Yunho-yah, always taking on the blame! Why can’t you be a little more selfish for once! Tell me I’m the one being unreasonable, tell me Jaejoong you’re so goddamn sensitive haven’t you thought of MY feelings for a change! )

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thepwahlove August 3 2010, 07:08:04 UTC

Oh gosh! This is really really sweet!

Thanks for writing~

Do you mind if I add you?

vicshi August 4 2010, 05:26:14 UTC

I don't mind at all :) will add you back
thanks for commenting :)

kirakiraayumi August 3 2010, 07:43:52 UTC

This was REALLY good. And heartwrenching. But still good.

I loved how Yunho was so real about it. It was awesome. Even against Changmin's sarcasm.

Though I can't help but try to imagine how the heck Min actually covered for him. XD "He didn't feel well and went home" wouldn't work well... lol

But still, amazing job! :D

vicshi August 4 2010, 05:31:17 UTC

your words blew me away, i'm really glad to hear that :)
omg yes i was actually thinking that's how Min would cover up for Ho hahahah
thanks for ur comment love ♥

aleen94 August 3 2010, 07:45:53 UTC

aww..
that is so sweet!!
yun get out at night just to see his joongie!!
miss all of them so much!!

vicshi August 4 2010, 05:32:08 UTC

i miss them too!!
thanks for commenting :)

eskiie August 3 2010, 08:02:37 UTC

Ahhhh, SO CHEESY. But you write really well, so that makes up for it! And you know I like perfect perfect angst with a perfectly happy ending.

I actually don't read JaeHo fics anymore, so this is my first one in... quite a while. Makes me miss them.

vicshi August 4 2010, 05:33:49 UTC

we all miss them like crazy, if i start writing lots would u read them too xDD
says the big block of cheese
i'm glad to have ur approval ♥♥

now I'll be brutally honest supersonicjaz August 3 2010, 08:17:49 UTC

I effing loved it, Even though it's a band fic and I avoid those like the plague. See how much it drew me in?

♥

Re: now I'll be brutally honest vicshi August 4 2010, 05:35:47 UTC

yes and i love how you loved it XD *hugs*
should I write AU next or what ;D do u mind mpreg?

Re: now I'll be brutally honest supersonicjaz August 4 2010, 09:59:40 UTC

Yes please!
I hate mpreg. but I'll try and make an exception with you.

Re: now I'll be brutally honest vicshi August 5 2010, 02:46:14 UTC

aww u spoil me too much XD
i was thinking of lawyer!ho & chef!jae
uhmm but they gotta be married to have babies right LOL

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