[one-shot] Emotional Surprise

[vicshi]

my first time writing, comments highly appreciated :)

for chepii for being so wonderful

Comments

[feelingofangst]

Poor Jae ):
I'm glad that yunho's being so caring and sweet. This is nice, thanks for this fic ^^

[vicshi]

and thanks for reading & commenting :)
Yunho's being the perfect boyfriend as always ♥

[yunho]

Awww, I really liked this even if it was a little sad. This is your first time writing? It was very good!

One teensy little thing though:

tell me Jaejoong you’re so goddamn sensitive haven’t...

I think you meant 'insensitive' there :)

[vicshi]

yes i did *slaps head* thank you for correcting!
maybe you can be my beta in the future xD just kidding ♥
btw love ur marriage!verse series☺

[greese_gurei]

I miss them T.T I miss them so bad right now

Thank you for sharing^^ and must I say, for this being your first time...you did a great job! Keep it up and you'll see more of me, LOL XD

[vicshi]

we all miss them bb T_T
yes i've plans to write an AU one-shot next :)
thanks for commenting ♥

[greese_gurei]

*sobs* one-shot...?

I'm gonna stalk your journal until it's updated XD and you're welcome

[vicshi]

hhm we'll see ;) if it turns out too long i might split it onto a few chapters
am flattered to be stalked ♥ i started it today so it shouldn't be too long

[miya_fangirl]

T____T <3 Ahh l0ved this fic hun. So heart breaking yet so heart-warming. Ambivalent much? lol

”I’m just Jung Yunho now, worrying about a Kim Jae Joong.” -> This here. How I wish and believe it is true, that all the troubles between them doesn't change the fact that they are there for one another no matter what...

Somehow I imagine the situation is like that b/w the 3, with JJ moping around most of the time lol.

Cant wait for your next fic XD When I find mine Ill share with you girls - but its suuuper old and is angsty lol *likes angst*

[vicshi]

why don't i have u on my friends list. *adds*
glad you liked it hun, i really wish reality is similar to this too
poor Jae being stuck with those two *coughs* I choose to believe yunjae is still in contact w/ each other even though it may be not as intense
as fellow angst lover, i'm demanding u post ur storyyyy
i just started writing my second one so it should be up within d next few days lol
this is kinda addicting ><"

[kiki_and_chels]

This was so cute. I loved it =) was this really your first time? lol, you did a really good job =)

[vicshi]

why thank you ♥ i'm glad you loved it ^^
i also have a new chaptered fic if you're interested XD
thanks for commenting

[kiki_and_chels]

I saw that! i just...I have to wait to read chaptered fics. I wait until its almost finished to start cause its hard for me to read an unfinished fic. hahah I know its bad (and thats why I always comment late on like the last chapter and the author is like wtf where were you LOL) Its not like i read it..I just wait to read it :) I also know sometimes thats not good cause the writers dont want to write if theres not enough feedback..so sometimes i tell the author i will read it, just not yet =) I know i make like, no sense. hahahaha
but i will look into yours because the way you wrote this one shot was really good. =) I will just wait for another update or so kekeke <3 <3 hope you understand? but you did gain a new fan! =)

[vicshi]

ahh it's like watching drama isn't it, some ppl like to wait till all the eps are out before watching d whole series straight in a row :)
no worries i understand, flattered to have a new fan ♥
'difference between us' is only a short story so won't be long before it's finished, just telling u ;p