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Hey aleks! I love the use of adjectives you have used! It really paints a picture in the reader’s imagination due to the amount of detail you have added! It looks like you put in a lot of effort into this piece of writing! Good work! Looks like you had a ball at future!

Recently new surroundings and opportunities have been specified to us individually. For many of us, Starting University as well as completing a degree in order to be financially stable once University has ended, has become a prime concern. Once being let out into the wider world, thoughts and ideas about the future have been replaying in my mind. ( Read more... )

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Bel! i loved it! I liked the way you used examples; this allows the reader to think about what you are stating and attempt to in cooperate it into the example given, in this case adam and eve. I completely agree with this- "think about your morals and your friends morals. There's gotta be ( Read more... )

 Dear Diary,
When the news of Brently's death had been announced, it had shattered me in many ways. I felt as if my heart had paused and pondered into the world of the unknown. It was difficult to disclose my feelings, and reveal my inner thoughts, because I knew that my feelings would cause an empowerment of shame and disgust. The disgust and ( Read more... )