Cut the cards, cut the deck

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Comments

[idekmybffjill]

I want you to know.

That it took me a good 10 minutes after reading this to catch the "cut the deck" pun.

Jesus woman you have not changed. xD

[whipchick]

Great pun :) And creeptastic!

[eternal_ot]

+1

[morettaallstar]

I love the general journal-y start into the horror/supernatural, false sense of security and BAM! Murder. :D

[mamas_minion]

Nice twist I like the way this story unraveled.

[logical_fallacy]

I'm obviously dumb because I didn't catch the pun until someone else pointed it out. *groans*

The voice in this piece was really good and you kept me guessing until the end.