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Jul 09, 2008 06:55

THE OUTLAND

Genre: AU
Rating: NC-17 for m/m sex and language
Feedback: Any and all is welcome
Disclaimer: These are Annie Proulx's brilliant original characters and her story, and I have treated it and them (and her) with as much respect as I can muster.

This story is for Canstandit, with thanks for her ongoing support and help.
CHAPTER 12 )

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adahleah July 9 2008, 04:46:18 UTC
great chapter. My guess is that it was Junior on the phone with Jack, arranging a visit .

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eandj July 9 2008, 05:40:43 UTC
awesome as always
I loved the most that Ennis is now almost 'comfortable' in public with Jack
"Ain't lettin you outta my sights, bud, not no more."
thanks
Paula

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denim_girl2006 July 9 2008, 05:50:31 UTC
What a great chapter!!! I really enjoy hearing Jack & Ennis talk to each other. That's written so well. Loved that the girls went out with them, the presents, etc. Was a bit concerned when Alma showed her face....now the end, that gets my curiosity going. I hope it's something good.

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poppyhoney_67 July 9 2008, 08:31:40 UTC
Such a great chapter, so descriptive and wonderful. Love how easy they are with each other now, its a joy to read that. Loved too that Ennis included Jack in seeing his girls. But I'm intrigued by the ending and worried that has something to do with the guy Jack saw and couldnt stop talking about. Hope I'm over-reacting about that, I dont want anything to spoil what Ennis and Jack have now, not after all this time.

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tizi17 July 9 2008, 09:04:23 UTC
oh i just hope poppyhoney is not right about this.. but that was my first impression.. after all the allusion jack had made during their trip..
but on the other hand.. didn't he also have weak knees looking at ennis at the restaurant, knowing he was there with him?
always those cliffhangers..
but that's why we love those stories - yours especially.. ! thank you so much for it!

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