Comments | withinveritas: May Angels Lead You In, Part 2; C/C; PG

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May Angels Lead You In, Part 2; C/C; PG

Jan 08, 2005 14:05

Title: May Angels Lead You In, Part 2
Author: withinveritas
Rating: PG
Characters: Charlie/Claire, Jack/Kate, Hurley
Summary: They survived the island, drugs and several births but something more sinister has been taking hold.
Note: I wrote this for the Tearjerker challenge. Title is from the song "Hear You Me" by Jimmy Eat World. You can find part one here.

( “You remember that song I used to sing to you? The really cheesy one you like?” )

Comments 36

honerbright January 8 2005, 23:30:43 UTC

*sniffle* so amazing. jeez your evil! *adds to memories*

withinveritas January 9 2005, 06:27:19 UTC

Aww! -hands over tissue-

And I've been added to someone's memories! How cool! -hugs-

literarylemming January 8 2005, 23:50:50 UTC

Oh my God, you have no idea how hard I'm crying right now. Shit, my mascara's running and my foundation's streaming down my neck... *rubbing eyes with arm* Honey, this is so frigging heartbreaking and beautiful. I desperately want the next chapter, but at the same time I don't, because every chapter brings it closer to the inevitable end. *biting lip* Part of me wishes some miracle would happen and he'd live, but then I remember this is MY challenge, and the whole point of the thing was to kill off half of the Snuggly duo. But I'll be darned if I wish it wasn't! LOL!

*hugs!* Beautiful!

withinveritas January 9 2005, 06:37:12 UTC

-hugs back- Thank you!

You know, this whole fic has taken on a mind of it's own. It's already spawning a sequel (how can I write a sequel to this is beyond me but my muse thinks it's possible) and is taking over my keyboard. -shakes fist- Damn you, M! LOL

literarylemming January 9 2005, 06:38:48 UTC

LOL! A sequel? Oh God. I don't know if my heart can take that! LOL! But I'll take all the cursing you can fling at me if it means I get more. ;) *cackle/joy!*

*hugs more!*

amarettolime January 9 2005, 01:32:48 UTC

I accidently read this part first, but it stood pretty well by itself. Ugh, I don't want Charlie to die :(

I am so excited that you used a Jimmy Eat World song, I love them <3

withinveritas January 9 2005, 06:40:12 UTC

Really, it stood alone quite well? I'm surprised; I had this originally written as one big long fic and I didn't think it had any good start and stop points. Apparently, I need to take a step back from my fic every so often. ;)

And I love Jimmy Eat World as well. Two of their songs are on my playlist for this fic, My Sundown and Hear You Me.

Yes, I have a mini-soundtrack for the fic. Yes, I'm a dork. lol

yndigot January 9 2005, 01:38:43 UTC

I hate deathfic, but I'm reading this and loving it. Who knew I was a sucker for cheesey, romantic, tear-jerker stories.

withinveritas January 9 2005, 06:40:59 UTC

Well, I am! lol And I'm glad you are too! Thanks for reading and replying! :)

dwlikeebeinlost January 9 2005, 03:45:25 UTC

O.m.g!!!

EEEK!!

This is so sad and yet sweet!!!

I can't wait for more! ::sniffle::

withinveritas January 9 2005, 06:41:50 UTC

Thank you! Tissue?