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May Angels Lead You In, Part 2; C/C; PG

Jan 08, 2005 14:05

Title: May Angels Lead You In, Part 2
Author: withinveritas
Rating: PG
Characters: Charlie/Claire, Jack/Kate, Hurley
Summary: They survived the island, drugs and several births but something more sinister has been taking hold.
Note: I wrote this for the Tearjerker challenge. Title is from the song "Hear You Me" by Jimmy Eat World. You can find part one here.

( “You remember that song I used to sing to you? The really cheesy one you like?” )

Comments 36

schmooie730 January 9 2005, 04:19:15 UTC

This is so sad!!!! Now he has to tell his children what's wrong! OH man! Great job though!

withinveritas January 9 2005, 06:43:32 UTC

Thank you! :)

jessionthemoon January 9 2005, 05:32:29 UTC

I really really like this story, but I think one of the kid's names have changed since Chapter 1? Wasn't the oldest Jason before?

Sorry to nitpick. I really do quite enjoy this story, sad and angsty as it is. I can't wait for more!

withinveritas January 9 2005, 05:43:49 UTC

Ha, now see! This is why I can't beta my own stories. Thanks for pointing out that little mistake; I kept fiddling around with the oldest son's name. Apparently I missed it in translation from chapter 1 to 2. facepalm

Anyway, thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

kristin80 January 10 2005, 19:29:12 UTC

Why are you doing this to me? So sad...So sad...I just want them to be happy? Is that too much to ask? Someone, please anyone. Give me a link to a happy fluff fic...

withinveritas January 10 2005, 19:54:26 UTC

Erm. . . there are some happy ones on charlie_claire.

kristin80 January 10 2005, 20:19:29 UTC

Thanks...I have been reading mainly Jack/Kate ones except for yours..And I am a little scared too but I think that I might wander over into the Sawyer/Kate land today...

Aww screw it I don't have to choose I'll just find me a nice Jack/Kate/Sawyer fic...

withinveritas January 10 2005, 20:27:05 UTC

I think there is a comm for J/K/S, too. But C/C is good. Especially fics by literarylemming. She writes some really fluffy ones. They're good. She's a Ros writer, too, but I can't find her Ros writing. :\

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rainkit July 13 2006, 05:46:02 UTC

that was so sad. :( i can't haelp but cry. you are such a good writer, thank you so much for writing this story.