Be my light; Hardycest [One shot]

[xdreamthextreme]

Title: Be my light.
Author: xdreamthextreme 
Pairing: Matt Hardy/Jeff Hardy
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Don't own, sadly.
Author's Notes: Yay! Done! Finally! This is my first sex scene ever, be gentle please! D: But yea. Hardycest! Whoot! Don't click if you don't like it. Goddamn flammers. :P

Comments

[teddysbabymama]

Oh damn!!!!
I'm not typically one for Hardy!cest but the more I read it,the more okay with it I feel. Afterall,it's just fictional so I'm working at not being so uptight about 2 brothers doing the nasty hahah.
And yeah..this was so well written,love this!
Didn't Jeff actually have sex in a tree,too!?

AND OMG! I was on the floor when Jeff ran into that tree. LMFAO!!!!!

And the ending :( Poor Matt!!

[xdreamthextreme]

lmfao! doing the nasty hehehehe

Aw thank you! It's my first fic in a while. :P
Yes, yes he did. I figured I should write about it too. It'd make an interesting story. ^^
hahahaha I had to! I can picture him running into a tree! lmfao.

Sad!Matt is indeed...sad. lol

[rkowhore79]

ok, where is this imfamous "sex in a tree" info from??? a dvd? interview? whaaat??!! lol

[snapsnapsabby]

I think it's on a DVD. Not sure which one though! The video was posted on TOC I think! o.O

[rkowhore79]

i don't remember it!!!! gahhh!! must see NOW!!!

[rkowhore79]

oooh, can't wait to read!!
*saves for later when mom isn't sitting right here!!* lol

[616poisongirl]

*yey*
Im saving this for when I get some alone time later:D

[rkowhore79]

lmfao! that's what i JUST said, too!!!

[teddysbabymama]

"alone time"...lol

[616poisongirl]

:D
I dont want to have to explain to anyone why im so flustered sat at my computer.

[lalaith86]

Hardycest isn't normally something I read, mostly because while I like both boys fine, I don't like them together and am not a big enough fan to see past that. However, I've seen you post on the wrestleficathon so I figured I'd give it a go. ^^

There is a lovely feel to this. You description is apt. Rough around the edges, but flowy enough to remind us of a dream scenario yet also enough 'Jeff' to not convince us so immediately.

The sex-scene was a very good first attempt, so don't worry about that. The more you write them, the easier it'll get. ;) (Though, to be honest, they never become as easy as writing other things. To me, at least.)

The characters feel in-character, even though they're dream characters in this, and I love that you used a bit of real life to construct this. Makes it more real.

I do have a comment or two, though. First of all, the way you write speech.

Quotes:
"Let’s go get a closer look," their eyes met and locked.
"Asshole." Jeff whispered as he began to climb the tree, Matt following his lead. This is how

[xdreamthextreme]

wrestleficathon? lol I don't think I ever posted there...I'm not really sure though! I havent written anything in a long time! hahah. But thank you for reading anyway.

Yea, I do need a beta. Would you mind, if it's not too much trouble? ^^;
Lol it's no problem! It was actually pretty helpful! Thank you. :D

[lalaith86]

I must have confused you with someone else, then. XD Well, maybe consider this a cheap plug, then. *snicker*

Sure, I'd be more than happy to. I can be very nitpicky, though, when I beta something. As long as you can deal with that, then send me whatever you want beta'd through email. My email should be listed on my profile. ^^

I'm glad it helped!