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Plans, Part Two

Jun 12, 2006 08:47

Plans, Part Two of Three.

Part One is here.

It has been made painfully clear to me that I live for feedback.

Thanks to the angel of beta-ness,

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JUSTIN'S CAMPAIGN - told ya i was gonna call it that! happier_bunny June 12 2006, 22:24:17 UTC

OK...I'M GONNA USE CAPS SO I CAN SEE WHAT I'M TYPING ;D

I was starting to think we were in Princess Bride territory. You know. True love. BWHAHHAHAAH! PERFECT REFERENCE.

“Yeah. He did.” I gave him a look. “He does.”

“Let me ask you one thing. Do you think I love him?”

Michael was quiet for a minute, but he answered. “Yes.”

“Then can you just trust that? For… ten minutes? A day? That I love him?” I watched his face while his thoughts chased all over it. There aren’t too many people easier to read than Michael Novotny.

“OK.”

“What does that mean? Exactly?”

“You love him. I’ll trust it.” And he walked off to where Ben and Melanie were sitting with Jenny. I LOVE YOU FOR THAT...IF FANS WOULD JUST TRUST HIM, THEY WOULDN'T FEEL SO BAD....I REALLY DON'T THINK HE'D EVER INTENTIONALLY HURT BRIAN.

GUH THE LOVE.

THIS IS SUCH A SWEET VISUAL: Brian was sitting next to Justin and Jenny - fuck, he was draped around Justin and Jenny, holding her little hand and making faces at her while Justin leaned into him and laughed. And then ( ... )

Re: JUSTIN'S CAMPAIGN - told ya i was gonna call it that! happier_bunny June 12 2006, 22:25:49 UTC

ok that should be unannounced trip to NY...d'oh.

Re: JUSTIN'S CAMPAIGN - told ya i was gonna call it that! xie_xie_xie June 12 2006, 22:51:42 UTC

The NY trip was really important for two reasons ( ... )

Re: JUSTIN'S CAMPAIGN - told ya i was gonna call it that! happier_bunny June 12 2006, 23:03:06 UTC

I caught the subtley of Justin's campaign (hee)...Brian did need to go to NY and I can't wait to find out about his second trip....and the art show was a perfect angle to use but htat's cuz you're brilliant. ;)

This moves you beyond just being a crack pusher, bunny .... you're like, what, a madam now? Of the best little fanficwhorehouse in livejournal land?
BWHAHHAHAHAHA....I'm so very proud! ♥

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chadmom June 12 2006, 23:23:23 UTC

Wonderful! What more can I say, except when is Part 3 coming???? :-)

xie_xie_xie June 12 2006, 23:44:54 UTC

I am further along with part 3 than I was with part 2 when I posted part 1, if that made any kind of sense. I didn't realize how people would breathe down my neck when I started this, I might next time wait until I have all the parts done to post. This was my first fiction so I was taking it slow.

So, you know, a couple of days. Tops. I'm seriously going to try for tomorrow, but sometimes it doesn't work how we want. And I still have to, you know, work for a living which SO sucks.

tgray June 13 2006, 01:34:20 UTC

Thank you so much for updating this! I really needed it! I love Justin's reveal of owning the house with Brian. I can just imagine the gasps! :-)

xie_xie_xie June 13 2006, 01:38:21 UTC

Thank you for feeding my new and troubling addiction to feedback. And I'm glad you liked it. :)

tgray June 13 2006, 02:33:39 UTC

LOL... shouldn't be anything troubling about it! Feedback makes the world go round! :-)

justinlovesart June 13 2006, 01:38:47 UTC

I think someone should make an icon of Jenny in her "snuggy cuddly romperette whateverthefuck" :)

xie_xie_xie June 13 2006, 02:00:38 UTC

I think someone should make an icon of Jenny in her "snuggy cuddly romperette whateverthefuck"

I live for this idea.

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xie_xie_xie June 13 2006, 02:01:41 UTC

Thank you!!! I love that image too... shmoopy though it be. I justify it because Brian is stoned and also, he was like this with Gus in canon so, fuck it. I love it. No excuses.