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xie_xie_xie

Plans, Part Two

Jun 12, 2006 08:47

Plans, Part Two of Three.

Part One is here.

It has been made painfully clear to me that I live for feedback.

Thanks to the angel of beta-ness,

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thumpathumpa June 13 2006, 02:20:28 UTC

How is Part 2 better than Part 1?!?! Part 1 was damn good.......but now Part 2 is...what's better than damn good?!
Damn Gooder? *scratches head*

I'm still giggling like a middle school girl over the "free your inner lesbian" from Part 1!! LOL

xie_xie_xie June 13 2006, 03:16:49 UTC

LOL, I'm so glad you thought so. I didn't want part 2 to be anti-climactic. Anti-climactic BJ fic is just SO WRONG.

thumpathumpa June 13 2006, 03:24:39 UTC

Well anti-climatic B/J fic is pointless because that would imply no orgasming(at least in my head) and that's just not acceptable!! LOL

xie_xie_xie June 13 2006, 03:28:07 UTC

Yeah, someone asked me, when I said I was writing a B/J story, if there would be sex in it. I'm like... it's a Brian/Justin story. I'm just saying.

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jane2005 June 13 2006, 02:52:22 UTC

I love this so much:

Somebody had to get a look at the latest edition of the Kinney Operating Manual, I had an idea Justin had been fucking around with it and nobody had a fucking clue.

You have the perfect, likable Melanie voice without making her different. And, Brian's Brian, but he's, well. Floaty. Um, is that a word?

I really like how you explain 513. Very, very nicely done.

xie_xie_xie June 13 2006, 03:14:51 UTC

LOL, I do promise, Brian is only so sweet cuz he is TOTALLY STONED and getting TOTALLY LAID and has Gus there.

I promised this was an angst free zone and it is, but Brian is going to be a little bit more... ummm... unfloaty... in part 3.

But I do think that sweet stoned Brian is canon, esp with babies. And I took his happiness at having Justin around directly from mid-S3, and a bit even from a couple of eps in S5.

mi_nion June 13 2006, 03:02:13 UTC

“Year one was a long time ago. Good thing you took another look.”
This is exactly the type of fic BJfic.net is looking for.

xie_xie_xie June 13 2006, 03:11:35 UTC

I'm going to post it there when it's complete. Thanks for the feedback. :)

mi_nion June 13 2006, 03:20:59 UTC

YAY!
BTW they accept WIP.

xie_xie_xie June 13 2006, 03:29:34 UTC

I have an account there, I'll go over and see how you post. Thank you!

court1429 June 13 2006, 03:33:37 UTC

Do you ever find yourself reading a fic (or a book, like, forever ago) and it's so delicious and you're enjoying it so much you just wanna prolong the first-read goodness, because of course you can go back and reread, but there's only one first read, so you keep getting up to do little things and coming back to it and reading a little more and getting up again and coming back and and and.....? 'Cause that is totally what I did with this chapter. So much to love. Herewith, my attempt at fangirling you with detailed feedback ( ... )

court1429 June 13 2006, 03:35:20 UTC

---- continued from post of illegal length above.

Nothing against Mikey, he’s Jenny’s dad and I actually love him to death, but he’s, you know, a comic book geek who can spend quality time with Gus without dumbing down his entertainment choices. I’m just saying.

lol Great line!

Justin looked smug. “No, not quite. I own this house with Brian. I’ve been here lots of times.”

Ooooohkay. Lindsay was going to have a heart attack next to me. “You OWN THIS HOUSE WITH BRIAN?” I thought about getting her a paper bag to breathe into. “Since when?”

“Since always. He bought it for me.”

Don't you know that just thrilled the fuck out of Justin to make that announcement and to be able to just toss it out there so casual lalala-like. Great image of Mel really handing Linds a brown paper lunch sack and Lindsay huffing and puffing into it.

Justin squirmed out of his arms and took the bottle away, laughing. “No, thanks. I’ve had enough. One of us has to be able to drive tonight.”You know, I really puzzled over that line and wondered where in ( ... )

xie_xie_xie June 13 2006, 03:57:17 UTC

Don't you know that just thrilled the fuck out of Justin to make that announcement and to be able to just toss it out there so casual lalala-like.

I squeed when I wrote it.

Great image of Mel really handing Linds a brown paper lunch sack and Lindsay huffing and puffing into it.

And it's totally canon.

You know, I really puzzled over that line and wondered where in the world they'd be going. Babylon? Woody's? Those just didn't seem likely. Jen's? Maybe. But then! I thought, "hrmmm... what if Justin means driving in the, uh, metaphorical sense? Yup. Liking that scenario even better.

Yuh, it was teh sex. They aren't going anywhere in the CAR. It was a little Justin joke at sweet stoned!Brian.

Are you SURE there should only be three chapters to this story? I'm really liking this little universe you've made.Well, I'm liking it too. It's very seductive, addictive, whatever you want to call it. This three part series is about Justin's plan. Then I have another series that slightly (but not substantially) overlaps with this one, which ( ... )

court1429 June 13 2006, 04:22:18 UTC

BUT ... it will not just be "and now from Brian's point of view, the same story." It's going to recast one or two scenes from this but mostly will take the story a little further down the road.

So it will go on. For how long, I don't know. As long as my muse keeps having the speshul cramp for Brian and Justin, I guess.

YAY!!! *pets gmta_nz with you and sends your muse excellent coffee, decadent chocolate, and the woman of her dreams. Or Brian & Justin. Whichever gets the job done. ;-D