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xie_xie_xie

Plans, Part Two

Jun 12, 2006 08:47

Plans, Part Two of Three.

Part One is here.

It has been made painfully clear to me that I live for feedback.

Thanks to the angel of beta-ness,

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intensefemme June 13 2006, 06:52:30 UTC

xie_xie_xie June 13 2006, 07:29:03 UTC

Just a little dot?

intensefemme June 13 2006, 07:36:08 UTC

It wouldnt accept a blank comment.

Thats how much it meant to me.

xxoo

llandaffaz June 13 2006, 08:41:31 UTC

I know I'm a little late with this but I wanted to save it for my bedtime reading so that I could savor it. I haven't read any other comments before writing this so I'm sorry if I'm repeating everything that's been said before but I wanted to write properly and sometimes I won't write if I think I'm not adding anything new. I did read Bunny say earlier in her journal that this was possibly better than Part One and I thought: Pffft....how can it possibly be better??? But, fuck me! I think I really did love it even more....how that is possible I don't know!

I really and truly loved every word, but these are the parts that really did it for me:

“I’m trying to get how a guy who writes an x-rated underground comic book about a gay superhero who gets blowjobs on the cover is calling our daughter ‘buttercup.’ BUTTERCUP? Where the fuck does that come from?”

I love your Mel/Mikey snark!

And then he caught sight of Brian across the room and something inside him lit up. Instant sunshine. How many times must I have seen that, and ( ... )

paddies June 13 2006, 08:44:49 UTC

I love your writing style and your characterization so very much!!!

I'd quote my favorite bits, but I can't because I truly love the whole freaking thing.

Love.

Love.

Did I mention that I love it? ;-)

_alicesprings June 13 2006, 09:14:35 UTC

MOTHERFUCKING PIECE OF SHIT LIVEJOURNAL DID NOT HAVE THIS SHOW UP ON MY FRIENDS PAGE ( ... )

budboi June 17 2006, 05:48:30 UTC

Sorry to barge in on your comment to Xie, but I am so with you in reading fic at work with a squished up window! I've taken to copying it into a word doc with tiny font so I don't have to hide the pics etc.
The things we do.
Of course, "they" can still find out I'm reading gay porn during work time, but it means that I got in and out quikly so it was probably an accident that I was there at all - you knowlike those pop ups for viagara. At least, thats my story...
Bud

_alicesprings June 18 2006, 12:27:46 UTC

:D

The things we do for B/J porn...hee!

tamalinn June 13 2006, 13:06:03 UTC

thank you.