소녀, 사랑을 찾아봐 [haesica, hyohyuk, hyosica, R]

[dalpaengee]

Title: 소녀, 사랑을 찾아봐
Pairing: HaeSica, HyoHyuk, HyoSica
Rating: R
Summary: Jessica tries to find love and gets lost in the process. (Sort of AU follow-up to 소녀, 사랑을 만나다Note: I wrote this for my creative writing class, again. I wanted to write something about a girl lost in love, and I was particularly interested in doing it about a Korean girl

Comments

[kpop_fandom96]

Jessica was extremely relatable and that's what i like abt. this oneshot. The characters are real and u can understand why they are doing this. e.g. Hae, even though i ship haesic...., all guys want to have sex with a hot girl, so yea i can understand his actions. Though the place was a bit fishy (pun intended ;) ) And Hyoyeon! She's just so mature and all coolish here :) But Hyohyuk kinda unnerve me cos as much as i like them, it was abit insensitive to be so close to Sica but it's understandable since they probably lived in squashed quaters. Anyway, you get 2 thumbs up for this wonderful oneshot that made me :D

[dalpaengee]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :) I really appreciate the comment. I guess it's rude of Hyoyeon & Hyukjae to do that with Sica there but it happens in real life, unfortunately :\

[dalpaengee]

I'm so glad you like both of them! And I'm happy you got to read stuff you wouldn't normally read. ♥ HyoSica is one of my favorites, so I write them often, but this is the most I've delved into them before, and my first time trying HyoHyuk and HaeSica. :)

[eternally_fisk]

:FFFFFFFF

omgggg, i don't even know where to begin
but let me just say, I love that you used korean -- like your jessica, there are times when youI can't help but describe situations as dapdaphae ;~;
/hugs sica

and lol, do I even need to say it?
the characterization is beautiful
the cultural meshing and her difficulty of assimilating is just palpable
(and the little added details of korean culture is <3)

idk idk
i love it

[dalpaengee]

Thank you! I felt like I couldn't get across the culture/self-identity confusing that Jessica was feeling without using the korean words, and I hope it wasn't too confusing for people. I'm really happy you liked it and thanks so much for commenting!

[raplaplacp]

I like that you didn't romanize the korean words. That was really nice, probably not for those who don't know the language but I really thought it was cool. I like this style of writing. It kept me interested. I agree with some of the other comments this was depressing. Donghae made me want to punch him. Hyoyeon, I really didn't know what to think about her. All in all this was awesome I'll look forward to other things you write.

[dalpaengee]

Thanks! I hope the non-romanizing wasn't too confusing. I really wanted to include it to make Jessica's own confusion with the culture clash and her self-identity come through even more. People are really seeming to hate Donghae in this, but I feel like he was only doing what he thought was right, etc, but I'm glad you liked it as a whole! (also, icon twins!)

[burger]

This is actually my first time reading a fic with the girls in it and I'm so glad it was this one. It broke my heart, for Donghae because he was really trying but he just couldn't turn himself into what Jessica wanted, and for Jessica of course because she can't seem to find what she wants. Ah, this was beautiful, I loved reading it :)

[dalpaengee]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked your first foray into snsd fic :) I'm really glad that dynamic for HaeSica came through because some other people have said they were angry at Donghae, etc, lol. But thank you so much for the comment and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. :)