[FIC] Snow [One-Shot]

Jul 01, 2008 00:32

Title: Snow
Length: One Shot
Author: zorata
Rating: PG-15 for sensitive ideological material
Genre: Angst (and a whole lot of narration)
Summary: A picture speaks a thousand words, but a prayer grants a thousand wishes. And so Junsu will pray for Yoochun, everyday.

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quiet_heartache July 1 2008, 10:22:58 UTC
lol i love ur note at the end. ure very brave to write something so serious...

it wasnt boring. i like how u used snow and i expect uve gotten across the religious thing quite well, the struggle, the big decision.

shakespeare, well.. hes just a genius. but a dead one. so hooray for us living people XD r.i.p old bard

thanks

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zorata July 2 2008, 08:38:00 UTC
It actually took a lot of courage to post this up XD I started writing this a long time ago, and even modified it quite a few times. I don't see a lot of this kind of writing around here, so I really don't know how people will take it. I'm happy it wasn't boring! ^^" I'm not so good with narration without sarcasm, so this was a challenge for me.

Maybe I should start speaking in iambic pentameter...then I'd be a living genius XD *dreams on*

thank you for reading!

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jing_16 July 1 2008, 10:35:43 UTC
i've been waiting for someone to write about junsu struggling between his faith and love for yoochun.
thanks so much for this!

chun doesnt love su that way =(
it'll make things more complicated and hard for su to let chun go if chun loves him back right?

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zorata July 2 2008, 08:42:38 UTC
wow you've been waiting? XD what a major coincidence that I post this then. It's actually my first time writing yoosu, and I just had to choose something so serious to write about =_=

yes, it would be extremely complicated if chun loved him back. I wanted to write about that too, but it's unfamiliar territory for me and there's no way I'll be able to portray it well. >_<" I'm keeping the idea in the back of my mind though.

Thank you so much for reading!

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jing_16 July 3 2008, 17:41:02 UTC
yes, this is really random, but i thought about it alot one day when i was climbing the stairs.that was when i realised this part of junsu has not been touched upon in fics.
i really want to know how he might be feeling about it and how he might be dealing with it.
write more yoosu =)
maybe you can have an alternative ending to this.

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zorata July 3 2008, 23:33:08 UTC
haha that is very random XD I'm probably write more yoosu. ^^" I'll see where my inspiration goes. =D

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shou_un July 1 2008, 12:46:30 UTC
i really love reading fics where the boys are, you know, facing struggles we would expect them to face in real life. It makes it seem a little bit more real, and also a little sad, but it's a good kind of sense.
Not making very much sense. But loved this.
Now.. a fic with Yunho's religious struggles AND only son in a traditional family struggles .. XD

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zorata July 2 2008, 08:47:25 UTC
you made sense. I totally understand what you mean. The point of writing, fanfic or not, is to create something readers can relate to, and to eventually have a deeper understanding of themselves through these experiences.

Now...yunho...haha that's a lot of struggles there. XD I think I read somewhere that Yunho's a Christian too?

Thank you so much for reading this!

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shou_un July 2 2008, 11:52:08 UTC
thanks for the add :)

And yeah he is, and I think he may be 7th Day Adventist like Junsu, which is one of the more conservative denominations. Don't take my word on the 7th Day Adventist Church cos no reliable sources I know of for that.

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zorata July 3 2008, 23:37:53 UTC
most of the koreans I know are conservative protestants, so I'd assume they'd be something like that. Thanks for the info! =D

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chloe1910 July 1 2008, 14:22:15 UTC
this is really rather heartbreaking..poor Junsu.

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zorata July 2 2008, 08:54:44 UTC
^^" I feel sorry for him too...

thank you for reading~!

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dongbangnie July 1 2008, 15:53:04 UTC
it's beautiful

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zorata July 2 2008, 08:54:55 UTC
awww thank you! <3

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