dear chris ( Read more... )

Originally this was supposed to be directed to someone close to me but then I decided it to address it to someone else. This letter was NEVER sent ( Read more... )

This is something I need to post for me. Not written for aesthetic perfection.

GuiltyI always think of you as “she ( Read more... )

I wrote this a while back, its not very good though ( Read more... )

Another poem I would like feedback on. It's more "finished" than the other one, which I have completely torn apart and recrafted ( Read more... )

Hello I came across this community and decided to join. I'm coming to you from Nogales Arizona. I like to write poetry and last year I wrote a short story called "7 letters" and each chapter was in a way a poem. I love to read other people's poetry. A lot of people think poetry is all about rhyming which is so NOT true, and my poems usually don't ( Read more... )

( letter to my friends )

there's a scaffold on your building ( Read more... )

I noticed this community seems to be dying, and that's a shame. I am posting this because I am in DESPERATE need for some constructive criticism, especially on the last stanza. I am so entirely sick of hearing what a good writer I am. I want someone to tell me what stinks and what can be built upon, so I can grow, and learn. BUT, for now, I ( Read more... )

Dear Community,

I need to apologize for being such a horrible moderator. I have not been updating in this journal, and it has been dying down quite rapidly. I have just been so busy, and now I have a lot of free time on my hands, and I promise that I will try and be much more active. Once again, I apologize.

Love Always, Your Mod Taylor.

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