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Aug 03, 2004 23:09

I was sitting in my room and thinking about Hogwarts and how it is really a microcosm of society -- its pitfalls (broken stairs) and treachery (disguised walls) earlier today. My thoughts inspired me to write a poem ( Read more... )

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cedeadric August 4 2004, 02:50:13 UTC
lovely.

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alwayspms August 4 2004, 13:46:53 UTC
Thank you, Cedric. Remember, I am here, if you ever need anything.

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cedeadric August 4 2004, 21:55:31 UTC
Currently in Ibiza.
Need sun screen.

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alwayspms August 4 2004, 22:28:42 UTC
Yes.

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deranged_gofer August 4 2004, 09:09:27 UTC
Excuse me, who am I?

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deanosovirtuoso August 4 2004, 17:16:20 UTC
That was very inspirational. Despite all the chaos that surrounds us, you have remained at peace. You've got such a cool, calm soul. I agree that you must to let yourself become caged. The bird is more beautiful and most content when in flight. A bird in a cage is not much of a bird.

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hufflepuff4life August 4 2004, 17:22:26 UTC
And now I know why the caged bird sings. Or writes poetry, or something.

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deanosovirtuoso August 4 2004, 17:52:19 UTC
I knew you would soon reach enlightenment.

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alwayspms August 4 2004, 17:38:18 UTC
Thank you, Dean. I am, of course, glad to hear that my poetry can reach out to other people such as yourself. It is good to remember that when I am feeling overwhelmed by the utter malice I often feel from the world.

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prefectlyernie August 4 2004, 18:49:21 UTC
well, I don't see what all the fuss is about. It didn't even rhyme!

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alwayspms August 4 2004, 22:29:57 UTC
Rhyming is often constricting when one is attempting to express intense emotion, such as sadness. It is clearly much more deep and meaningful when it is free-verse.

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prefectlyernie August 4 2004, 22:56:28 UTC
whatever you say.

I prefer limericks in any case.

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alwayspms August 4 2004, 23:26:33 UTC
Limericks are indeed entertaining. Do you write them?

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potter_mouth August 4 2004, 21:55:28 UTC
YOU KNOW WHAT YOUR PEN NAME COULD BE? V. STUPID POETRY.

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alwayspms August 4 2004, 22:32:04 UTC
That doesn't make much sense, Harry. A Poem, by V. STUPID POETRY. Thank you for the suggestion, though. I suppose.

Are you still conflicted, then?

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potter_mouth August 4 2004, 22:42:03 UTC
OF COURSE I'M STILL CONFLICTED, V. STUPID POETRY, MY PARENTS AND GODFATHER ARE DEAD AND THERE IS A DARK LORD PLOTTING TO RUIN MY LIFE. WHAT THE HELL DO YOU EXPECT.

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alwayspms August 4 2004, 22:44:21 UTC
I suppose I should have expected that. I know how it is to be conflicted. My boyfriend is a corpse. He was killed by a dark lord. Things are hard.

I feel I need a clever nickname for you.

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