Surprise! I am complaining about my own stuff. And now I shall rip my own story to shreds. Well, what little of the story that I have, really.
Premise: Aveyond/Twilight crossover with "Edward" and "Jacob" rolled together into one person, thus eliminating the love triangle, and hopefully with more plot than "woe is me, our love is forbidden".
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It's nitpick time, yo! )