What did Teri have to give up to get Kim's freedom? It had to have been huge. That we care so much about these characters is a tribute to the great writing.
Bringing the angst, I see. Poor Kim; I don't think Domino is as gone as Teri thinks, or wants to think. Poor Teri; what did he give up for Kim? His freedom? Is he even more tied to Dunraven than he was before? What a mess. (But a beautifully written mess!) Ann Marie
Whoa, good stuff Randall! Rips me up. It seems so unfair.
"And what did you give up in exchange?" Ok, that's a really scary thought. What would they want from Chimera? (And that last part, "I hear Domino chuckle" - is off the Creep-out meter!)
A little poem bubbles up in my brain. I sing-song the verse, "Rain, rain go away..."
I hear Domino chuckle.
How ominous that childhood songs sounds. So sad that this is the only outcome for Kim and it's a maybe. Maybe Domino won't resurface, maybe Bob won't hunt him down and try to kill him again.
And Teri, yet again bartering away a piece of his soul. Such sadness.
I love the way you write all the characters especially Brian and Justin and Brog and Parker but you also do an outstanding job on these two or is it three?
The tension and anxiety builds. You two are back on a roll.
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"And what did you give up in exchange?" Ok, that's a really scary thought. What would they want from Chimera? (And that last part, "I hear Domino chuckle" - is off the Creep-out meter!)
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I hear Domino chuckle.
How ominous that childhood songs sounds. So sad that this is the only outcome for Kim and it's a maybe. Maybe Domino won't resurface, maybe Bob won't hunt him down and try to kill him again.
And Teri, yet again bartering away a piece of his soul. Such sadness.
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I love the way you write all the characters especially Brian and Justin and Brog and Parker but you also do an outstanding job on these two or is it three?
The tension and anxiety builds. You two are back on a roll.
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