Remembering

[childishgrin]

Title: Remembering
Author: Viv
Genre: angst
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Viewfinder [manga]
Pairing: Asami/Takaba, kind of
Disclaimer: *sighs*
Summary: Asami's thoughts since Akihito's 'disappearance'. [oneshot - companion to Comfort]

Comments

[sunflower1343]

But this is fluffy! Not as in frivolous, but in warm emotions. It's Asami falling in love so hard and fast he's willing to beg for it, and that's very lovely to read. Of course it's sad that they're worried about each other, but you can also see that as they're worried about each other for once and that's wonderful, and you know they'll see each other again and hopefully express it. Thank you. This really made me smile.

[offthesidelines]

Aaaah, I guess it is somewhat fluffy. Midway through I kinda realized it was turning quite mushy (much more than I intended it to be, at least), heh. Oh well, seems to work here.

[griffith978]

That was so sweet and sad at the same time. Asami does not sound OOC here at all (at least to me). It is a beatutiful piece, almost like a poem. Good Story! ^___^

[offthesidelines]

*squishes Yuki-kun to herself*

Erm, I mean, thank you!

By the way, I saw you were Canadian? From where? ^__^

[griffith978]

From Ontario close to the lake. ^_^

(sorry for the late answer though, I have not checked my emails for a while. :P

[offthesidelines]

Aaaaa, about... maybe 6 hours from me? *scratches head*. Well depending where close the lake. XD

[bergaya_haru]

*sobs* LOVES IT!! XD

[offthesidelines]

That's good!

awwwww......

[dyoklako]

this is all nice. it is a plausible possibility that Asami-san is now beginning to realize his growing attachment to his favorite fucktoy is actually something else and not just a mere possession to play with when the fancy strikes him.

you did good.... and it does screams for another part - Fei Long's, maybe? XDDDD

hope to get to read more from you. thanks! :)

Re: awwwww......

[offthesidelines]

I'm not sure about Fei Long. I mean, I initially had intended to write a Viewfinder fic in someone else's POV, but ended up writing both Akihito and Asami.

Might happen. XD

Re: awwwww......

[dyoklako]

I'm not sure about Fei Long. I mean, I initially had intended to write a Viewfinder fic in someone else's POV, but ended up writing both Akihito and Asami.

---- LOLZ! well, how about Kou, Takato, or Asami's bodyguards: Sunglasses and Blondie then? ^_~

Might happen. XD

---- Fei Long's? that'll be great! he's been not given enough love lately coz of NT. :P

Re: awwwww......

[childishgrin]

how about Kou, Takato, or Asami's bodyguards: Sunglasses and Blondie then?

... Guess again. ^.^

[haruaki9]

That was great...i think both Comfort and Remembering are wonderful...i think those two really need to understand and admit how much they care about each other...

[offthesidelines]

Oh, indeed they do.