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Question:

For those who know what I'm talking about...do you think it would be just as well to have the Thorvald-Nils thing revealed early on? My writing class was really confused by it and I wonder if I should just show what's going on earlier instead of waiting.

Or, rewrite and let it be a surprise for later in the book. What do you think?

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Chapter Twenty-Four
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Thorvald as I imagine him, except he needs a little facial hair


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