Comments | hp_remix: <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/underlucius">underlucius</a></strong> & <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/amanuensis1">amanuensis1</a></strong>

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underlucius & amanuensis1

Jul 28, 2004 23:12

Author: underlucius
Title: Gloria Patri
Pairing: Draco/Lucius
Challenge: The imitation of good faith is how you stumble upon hate - The Wallflowers, Invisible City

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Comments 34

anjenue July 29 2004, 11:36:52 UTC

Oh, what a fantastic pair! The Malfoy family being so rooted in tradition as it would seem they are, it's wonderful to see one of those traditions actually being put into action.

I second Switch for the smuttier sequel with Lucius-like lasciviousness.

anjenue July 29 2004, 11:37:15 UTC

NGAH, and I just realized how much alliteration that has. *stabs self*

_distortedimage July 29 2004, 12:34:44 UTC

These are wonderful. I love the mention of the danger in Lucius' smile in the short fic and Draco's lisp in the long fic.

tigra_666 July 29 2004, 20:06:49 UTC

Lovely. I love both brat!Draco and manipulating!Draco and the way you have combined them is simply wonderful. Loved the lisp.
"Well, of course. I'm seven now," Gorgeous.

Definately needs a smutty sequel.

stellahobbit July 30 2004, 02:45:28 UTC

I've always thought Draco was much cleverer than he let on.

glockgal July 30 2004, 10:20:57 UTC

Mmmmmmmmmmmm. That was, like. Such a Malfoy way of behaviour. It's all so subtle and tempered and, like, brewing underneath the surface. And you can see Lucius' attraction building, and him not wanting to think about it. I love that the most. Lucius wasn't sexualizing Draco at all as he grew up, he was just admiring, encouraging and coddling. His affection was what made Draco, during this growing up, start to consider his father fair game. I love how it was twisted around like that, and how it just makes sense ( ... )