Real Person Fic - CW: Shipwreck Between Your Ribs [Part 4/4]

[cherie_morte]

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PART FOUR

Comments

[ext_4188016]

This was such an epic love story. I loved your Jared so much. Thank you for such a lovely Saturday spent with this fix. I even forgive you for breaking mine (and Jensen's) heart. You write so beautifully -thank you for sharing!

[cherie_morte]

Thank you so much for such a lovely comment!! It's really great to know that the love story here felt epic and that my story was able to make you feel emotional. I can't say how much I appreciate you saying that my writing is beautiful. ♥

[peepingdru]

Ohhhhhhh man....heavenly...sad...awesome...thank uuuuuuu..xxx

[cherie_morte]

I'm so happy you enjoyed it, thanks for commenting! :D

[ext_4158564]

This was so emotional. How do you make those hard decisions? But I am glad true love prevailed in the end. I love that Jensen stayed true to his great love.

This was a lovely story. Thanks to you and your artist for sharing your wonderful talents.

[cherie_morte]

Thank you so much for reading my story and for commenting to let me know it made you emotional! :D I hope you've also let my artist know that you enjoyed her insanely lovely art!!

[tarattack]

This gave me so many feelings. My heart was in my throat for all of Jensen's anguish. This was so so so so good. I just want to roll around in your writing.

[cherie_morte]

Ah, I WANT YOU to roll around in my writing. *___* Thank you so much for reading my story and for taking the time to say such lovely things about it. I'm very happy that it was able to make you feel emotional.

[samgirl1]

Wow, Cherie, this was such a journey. I read the warnings so I knew it was going to be heavy and deal with mental health issues, but it still didnt prepare me. I love stories that make me think. Let's be real, I love porn, too, but this fic had so much substance. I finished it and I just kept thinking about the suicide part. I think of suicide and I think of one act of killing yourself. I was waiting for your Jensen or Jared to just give up and do it. Is it suicide if you make choices that you know are going to kill you eventually, even if it takes months? Yeah, it is. It was like this lightbulb moment. I must sound like an idiot, but I kept arguing with myself, like, no that doesn't count, he didnt DO anything physical, so that's not the same thing as slitting your wrists or actively trying to end your life. It's like passive suicide -- but it's the same end result, only worse! This way is dragging out the suffering and then I just felt even sadder, even though it had a happy ending. Poor baby selkie!Jared, I just wanna hug him and

[cherie_morte]

Thank you, really, for your kind words. I worked really hard on this one and definitely wanted it to have more substance and not just feel like an excuse for porn. Not that there's anything wrong with stories like that--god knows I write a ton, but it's not what I was trying to do here. You do not sound like an idiot, and in fact, I'm really glad my story made you think and I really appreciate seeing some of the thoughts it prompted! Nothing means more to me than knowing that my characters feel real and their struggles are compelling for readers. Thanks for all of your very sweet words and for taking the time to leave such cognitive and detailed feedback--it means a lot!