Jeez Louise, what you can do with a "quick pinch-hit"!
I love the idea behind this, and the structure that animates it, and the portraits of the S1 team from Sora's point of view. And most of all I love this look at Sora, who seems doomed to be the major Genii character who got the least character development.
Plus, scary-ass Sheppard. There's no bad there. *g*
Jeez Louise, what you can do with a "quick pinch-hit"!
*G* Well, I did have a couple of days to think about it. I really should do more pinch-hits-- all the fun of writing something desperate at the last minute, and none of that awkward month of procrastination beforehand! *G*
Thanks for your comment-- I'm glad you liked the story. I still have *some* hope they'll bring Sora back. I mean, she was cute! How can they not?
Very cool. I like the Ford part best, I think--it's so easy (for me, anyway) to forget that he's more than just an affable kid. It's nice to have a reminder that he's also someone who could pull off an exchange like:
"You gonna cooperate?" Ford asked.
"I guess you'll just have to starve me," Sora said.
"Could we do that?" Ford's companion asked.
Ford thought about it for a second. "Nah."
He stepped aside, and a third soldier lifted a Wraith stunner and shot her.
As someone else commented, it's interesting how few masks the Atlaneans wear compared to the Genii, and how little help those masks are going to be against the Wraith.
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I love the idea behind this, and the structure that animates it, and the portraits of the S1 team from Sora's point of view. And most of all I love this look at Sora, who seems doomed to be the major Genii character who got the least character development.
Plus, scary-ass Sheppard. There's no bad there. *g*
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*G* Well, I did have a couple of days to think about it. I really should do more pinch-hits-- all the fun of writing something desperate at the last minute, and none of that awkward month of procrastination beforehand! *G*
Thanks for your comment-- I'm glad you liked the story. I still have *some* hope they'll bring Sora back. I mean, she was cute! How can they not?
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"You gonna cooperate?" Ford asked.
"I guess you'll just have to starve me," Sora said.
"Could we do that?" Ford's companion asked.
Ford thought about it for a second. "Nah."
He stepped aside, and a third soldier lifted a Wraith stunner and shot her.
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Mmm, I like Ford. He's so sweet and so funny, but he's also *damn* good at his job, you know?
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :)
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Thanks for the comment! :) I'm glad you liked it. And your icon is TOO CUTE.
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As someone else commented, it's interesting how few masks the Atlaneans wear compared to the Genii, and how little help those masks are going to be against the Wraith.
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)
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