I was just looking through some of the new threads over at Serebii and then came to these lines. I laughed.

moonlightning
People, there's nothing wrong with starting with an Eevee. After all, it IS a starter in a Pokemon game, XD: Gale Of Darkness. In my original "trainer fic" my protagonist startedGood to see that 'I did it' is still a good ( Read more... )

So, I pick a random story to review at Serebii - Missingo. Master's, to be exact - and it turns out the author is a really popular one with lots of followers. Great. There hasn't been any drama yet so far, but this habit of mine of picking the wrong stories to review is getting old ( Read more... )

JCKane

Next on you're comment about Kaylie not telling us the story. you see that's where you're wrong. When I write a story (and I've read other books that have done the same) they treat the character as the narrator. This is mainly when it's done it first person view. So in this case, Kaylie is the narrator in this story. She's telling us her ( Read more... )

Ok, Silawen. First I'd like to thank you for you taking the time out to do that. There are some things I wanted to mention about the story.

One, the main reason why this story lacks a bunch of things is really hard to explain. You see a lot of times I write stories, or parts of stories, that lack good writing skill due to me not putting very ( Read more... )

I had almost reviewed EonMaster_One's story before realizing it was his and I probably shouldn't. Almost.

Would probably have resulted in hilarity, though.

That is all.

1-2 spaces should always be put after a period and one after a comma. Thats you're biggest grammar mistake, and although its not too important, it makes it cleaner. I recommend using a word processor, as it will tell you when something is off on sentence structure.*headdesk ( Read more... )

Pokemon and species of Pokemon are supposed to be capitalized. There isn't really logical debate.

Aaaah. Good old pokémon fandom. Still stuck on the same damn things. Bless.

Source.

Harryheart:

1: Best newbie: Nemmeh (partially because I've gotten to know her really well on another site)
2: Best veteran: Serebii anyone?
3: Kindest member: Blue Snover
4: Most helpful member: ManaphyMan
5: Most missed member: YamiRyu yes I know but I do miss her arguments
6: Most knowledgeable member: This is a tricky one but probably Silawen ( Read more... )

So, the fifth generation starters and trainers came out and all I'm left to wonder is...did they make them older just so that more and more badfic writers would make their beginning trainers fifteen year old?

*sigh*

You know, I always try to be positive when I look for a story to review. I know that I'm not going to like half of them, but I'm always looking to see them improved. PC, however? The stance some writers have towards criticism actually makes me long for Serebii's acceptance of it. (Or, well forced acceptance, anyway.) Let's hope some heavy reviewing ( Read more... )