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Through Sickness and Health, Part 4

Aug 04, 2010 05:09

Title: Through Sickness and Health, Part 4
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Donghae
Author: Skipturnstep
Rating: R (for language)
Genre: Romance
Words: 3,297
Summary: Flashbacks of the ups and downs of Kyuhyun and Donghae's relationship, told in five parts.
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3

WARNING! Spoilers under the cut.

( Cho Kyuhyun, so help me God. )

fanfiction:suju, pairing:kyuhyun/donghae

Comments 24

bonomanic August 4 2010, 09:40:58 UTC

I don't know whether to be extremely giddy or still depressed right now. >.< I'm so, so glad things are back on the right track now and that's making me hopeful for what's to come, but I'm also still a bit sad from reading this. From reading the struggles and from wanting to hate your Kyuhyun because he behaved like such an asshole (since it was really partly his fault that the situation developed in the first place, that idiot) and wanting to hug him comfortingly and never let go because he was beating himself up over it so much it even made the vengeful thoughts subside. He's such a stupid person in this chapter, but he seems to be stupid because he just doesn't know better or because he was afraid of whatever, so it's hard to stay angry at him ( ... )

skipturnstep August 4 2010, 14:04:39 UTC

What can I say? My Kyuhyun is stupid and my Donghae is too nice XD

You're perfectly coherent! No worries, I know exactly what you're saying. I have yet to write a fic that doesn't have a happy ending, which may be the hopeless romantic in me coming out, but honestly I hate stories that aren't happy in the end. So I think maybe that might be why I write fairy tale-esque stories XD

And your icon is so cute :D

Thanks for reading! The last part will be up within the next few days ^____^

heyy13 August 4 2010, 09:59:58 UTC

Kyu. <3

*clings to computer chair and refreshes every 2 hours for update*

o__< *eye twitch*

<3

skipturnstep August 4 2010, 14:06:14 UTC

XD Thank you for reading! The next part will probably be up within the next few days, so you don't have to sit there and refresh every few hours <3

heyy13 August 5 2010, 00:15:29 UTC

That's not the point it's symbolic. ;D

namikaze_jkc August 4 2010, 11:11:35 UTC

I don't know if I should squish Kyuhyun or knock him upside the head. I'M JUST PISSED AT HIM AND ZHOUMI FOR BREAKING HAE'S HEART!!!! (No that I have anything against Zhoumi... it's just that KyuHae has turned into my ultimate bias..)
Plus I can totally imagine Heechul saying all those things! Nobody messes with HIS favorite dongsaeng and gets away with it..
I also love the fact that their friendship is slowly healing... :D They're just so,.. so.. adorable together? (Can't believe I said that..)

Anyways..... I'll just be waiting for the next update.. \m/

skipturnstep August 4 2010, 14:09:16 UTC

XD Yes, Kyuhyun's kind of dumb in my fic...he let his body think instead of his brain and it just got him into a mess.

And yes, Heechul is such a bitch that I see him saying it too XD But it's only because he cares for his friends I guess.

Thanks for reading ^___^ The last part will be up in a few days!

nabiyun August 4 2010, 15:20:42 UTC

Poor hae,I dunno if I should be mad at Kyu or sorry for him :( I'm gonna stick with being sorry,cause he didn't mean to hurt Hae and is truly sorry for what he did (I'll just blame everything on Zhoumi since Kyu's my bias) I hope they can be happy togethr soon :)

skipturnstep August 4 2010, 16:49:57 UTC

Kyu's my bias too! He just doesn't seem like the type to be very savvy with relationships XD Thank you so much for reading!

nabiyun August 5 2010, 11:19:47 UTC

Nah,thanks for writing ;)

ex_digitalb August 4 2010, 15:34:40 UTC

Phew.
I am so glad that his run with Mi is over...Kyuhyun's right about the last bit, it's his life, and I'm really looking forward to him starting to be proactive about it and get his butt in gear, thank you very much. ^^

Great part, and I'm really looking forward to the next one again. ^^ ♥