Enjoying this story more and more with each new chapter. Justin's self-awereness is a thing of beauty. Thank you for writing from such an original and fresh perspective.
I, too, love this strong Justin. I'm glad he is finally telling Brian what he wants and how he's viewed what life can be. Now lets hope Brian catches the clue train. I am really loving this story. Keep it going.
Brian finally gets it that Justin is his equal. Hard to take for a control freak. I can't believe that I am actually ambivalent. Sometimes (lightning strike me) I am rooting for James.
I just read all six chapters in a row and am really enjoying it. My favorite is the conflict and the arguments though I loved their bed-bantering as well.
In prior chapters I've been rooting for Brian over James, but now I think I'm just rooting for Justin.
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You, young lady, have a very diabolical mind.
Do keep it up, I love it! Sooner, though, hmmm?
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Got me hooked, I'm staying tuned.
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In prior chapters I've been rooting for Brian over James, but now I think I'm just rooting for Justin.
Thanks for writing this!
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