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Challenge #13b: Back to Basics (Part 2)

Jan 16, 2012 17:59

Title: Back to Basics Part 2
Challenge Type: Story
Further Details: If you participated in Part 1, you may participate in this portion. Please note there will be one final part, and participation is required in both parts 1 and 2 to participate in part 3. For this part you will take the story you wrote in Part 1 and revise it down to be within 200- ( Read more... )

challenge13, challenge: multi, challenge: short story

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Preguntas nynaeve_sedai January 16 2012, 23:54:41 UTC

Shout, shout, let it all out...

Re: Preguntas etacanis January 16 2012, 23:57:30 UTC

Not a question, but I just want to say this is brilliant :D Revising is really my weak point so this is a great challenge for me.

Re: Preguntas jennickels January 17 2012, 20:51:23 UTC

YAY, I've been waiting all phase for this challenge. And I HATE editing and cutting but I love this challenge. I knew if I participated in anything it had to be this challenge. So excited.

Re: Preguntas duskblue January 19 2012, 09:38:18 UTC

Love this challenge. The first time I went through this in fictionland, I felt like my insides were being torn inside out. But the second time was actually pretty easy. Can you believe it?? So, I think it's a good thing! Thanks!

*edit* Then again, my fiction land starter story MAY have been 500 words... LOL!

TEAM PLAYWRIGHT nynaeve_sedai January 16 2012, 23:55:07 UTC

These are the things...

Re: TEAM PLAYWRIGHT ami_ven January 17 2012, 05:35:11 UTC

Title: Just the Two of Us (Revision One)
Word Count: 250
Rating: G
Original/Fandom: original (science fiction, set about 2277)
Pairings (if any): none
Warnings: none
Summary: Telemachus’s first mate has some plans for their stay in dry-dock.
Link: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/35296.html
Link to Revised Version: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/51827.html

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Re: TEAM PLAYWRIGHT shana0809 January 19 2012, 05:20:03 UTC

Title: Reflections
Word Count: 250
Rating: PG
Original/Fandom: Football RPF
Pairings (if any): None
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): RPF
Summary: Guti's thoughts after his life changes.
Link to Original:http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/39860.html
Link to Revised Version: http://wvbookclub.livejournal.com/53668.html#cutid1

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Re: TEAM PLAYWRIGHT ami_ven January 20 2012, 03:31:53 UTC

Um, I think you meant to post this under the team thread, not my entry. (I don't mind, it's just that I don't want the mods to miss yours if the list gets long)

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TEAM POETRY nynaeve_sedai January 16 2012, 23:55:23 UTC

...we could do without...c'mon...

Re: TEAM POETRY etacanis January 17 2012, 03:37:05 UTC

Title: Tick, Tock.
Word Count: 248
Rating: PG
Original/Fandom: Original
Pairings (if any): None
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): None
Summary Tick, tock, tick tock. Sixty seconds in a minute, sixty minutes in an hour, twenty four hours in a day, seven days in a week, fifty three weeks in a year, ten years in a decade, ten decades in a century. Tick, tock, tick, tock.
Link to Original: Here
Link to Revised Version: http://moineau.dreamwidth.org/1344.html

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Re: TEAM POETRY duskblue January 19 2012, 09:24:01 UTC

Title: "I wish I may, I wish I might..."
Word Count: 247
Rating: PG
Original/Fandom: Original: Paying the Consequences
Pairings (if any): Nicki/Blake
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): NA
Summary Justin finds out that his little sister, Nicki, is dating his worst enemy and shit hits the fan.
Link to Original: Part 1
Link to Revised Version: Part 2

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Re: TEAM POETRY lar_laughs January 21 2012, 18:44:10 UTC

Title: Batter Up (revised)
Word Count: 210
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Fandom - Flashpoint
Pairings (if any): Sam/Jules
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): none
Summary There was no way that a little gun shot was going to keep Jules away from the annual picnic.
Link to Original: Here
Link to Revised Version: Here

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TEAM PROSE nynaeve_sedai January 16 2012, 23:55:41 UTC

I'm talkin' to you...c'mon...

Re: TEAM PROSE wintervixen86 January 17 2012, 00:15:27 UTC

Title: Sharing a Room
Word Count: 242
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairings (if any): Teddy/James
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): None
Summary “Mum, the last time James and I shared a room, he was nine, I was fifteen and we spent the entire week fighting.”
Link to Original: HERE
Link to Revised Version: HERE @ BOOKCLUB

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Re: TEAM PROSE riverotter1951 January 18 2012, 01:42:01 UTC

Title: Humming Along
Word Count: 246
Rating: PG
Original/Fandom: Supernatural
Pairings (if any): Ellen Harvelle , Jo Harvelle, Ash
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc.): None
Summary: A night at Harvelle’s Roadhouse
Link to Original: http://riverotter1951.livejournal.com/21183.html
Link to Revised Version: http://riverotter1951.livejournal.com/22758.html

Re: TEAM PROSE meridian_rose January 18 2012, 19:20:07 UTC

Title: A Beautiful Day
Word Count:247
Rating:Teen
Original/Fandom: original characters in the Legend of the Seeker universe
Pairings (if any): Marrah/Larissa
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): mentions of 'off-screen' consensual sex including dominant/submissive roleplay
Summary A tender morning after moment between Marrah and Larissa
Link to Original: http://meridian-rose.livejournal.com/228763.html
Link to Revised Version: http://meridian-rose.livejournal.com/230673.html#cutid1

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TEAM MOD jennickels January 17 2012, 20:54:57 UTC

Title: Holding On to Love (To Save My Life) [version 2]
Word Count: 250
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Stargate SG-1
Pairings (if any): Jack/Sam
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): lots of blood
Summary Jack's been injured and he just needs to hold on a little longer.
Link to Original: http://jennickels.livejournal.com/136879.html
Link to Revised Version: http://jennickels.livejournal.com/137588.html