Hey there! Just wanted to give a small ramble that I'm still alive, and I'll try to hopefully give this LJ some love soon. I'd like to change the look and get back into writing my original story, The Timeless Tales. I still need to figure out how to join groups here and spread chances of my work being reviewed/critiqued/seen even, so hopefully I'll ( Read more... )

      So what I wanted to ask here in a post is what you think of my writing style. I basically would just like some feedback (for whomever is actually reading my original story) on what you think of it. Is it too descriptive? Not descriptive enough? Too long per chapter? Too short per chapter? Too long between chapters to be released? (I've been ( Read more... )

The Timeless Tales
By: Alex Livanos

Book I: The Beginning
Chapter II: Adamant Bonds of a Diligent Family

As the dew of the next morning began to subside, a much anticipated Yeuffie instantly awoke to find her senses tingling, as delightful aromas from the kitchen whisked through the hallway and into her bedroom. With one swift motion, Yeuffie ( Read more... )

The Timeless Tales
By: Alex Livanos

Book I: The Beginning
Chapter I: The Lovely Lady Who Would Be Prominent
      Once upon a time, in the far-away land of Amberlé, lived a beautiful young lady. Her story was one that would change the way the people of the future would know her as. It was this courageous, beautiful and enchanting woman that would set ( Read more... )

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