The mother of all RP horror stories, Part XIV

[pichi]

Previous Parts: Day 1: I, II, III, IV, V, VI, VII, VIII, IX, X
Day 2: XI, XII XIII
Last post we got our first taste of the actual log: an introductory post so full of fail I had to cut the rant short there to keep it at a reasonable length. We're ready to pick back up again now, and thankfully, most of the rest of these posts I don't have nearly as

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[kuchren]

Who is Hitachi? Like, seriously? If you hadn't mentioned that he was supposed to be some gang leader, I would so not have seen that from the way he's describes and the way he acts. And, we're assuming that Yuna gets these injuries and whatnot from Hitachi, aren't we? I'm not getting any vibes that Hitachi could raise a finger to anyone, let alone beat someone to a pulp.

I mean, I don't really watch movies or read books about crime lords, but when I think "crime lord" and "gangs" I'm kind of thinking a take-no-nonsense guy who gives off the impression that if you so much as do anything that questions his authority (which Yuna does a lot of, it sounds like) you're dead. I also didn't really envision him smiling so much. O_o I mean, he's higher in station than Rasu, he practically owns Rasu too, since he's hired him to do a job, and he's powerful. Why would he bother to force a smile and put up this "we're all friends here" persona if he obviously doesn't feel that way?

Or am I just reading way too much into this? >_>;

[mereprototype]

That is an amazing icon.

[kuchren]

Bradley makes amazing faces. And that particular one was kind of my reaction throughout the whole post.

[mereprototype]

Mine's been a cross between this and the previous icon.

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[koree]

But PIIIII-CHIIIIIIII! EFFORT IS LIKE, HARD. RESEARCH IS HARD. ISN'T RP SUPPOSED TO BE ABOUT INSTANT GRATIFICATION?! YOUR STANDARDS BE DAMNED.

[koree]

Also, stop hating on the poor Woobie. :( You're so mean. Can't you see he's in pain? How can you not be compelled to FLOCK TO HIS SIDE AND WIN HIS APPROVAL RIGHT THIS MOMENT, RASU? YOU'RE SO HEARTLESS. HOW CAN YOU NOT BE MOVED BY HIS BEAUTY? CAN'T YOU SEE THE SEX LOVE TROPHY? DISPLAY SLAVE'S TORMENTED SOUL, THE ONE ON THE INSIDE, DEEP DOWN

DEEP DEEP DEEP DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP DOWN WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY DOWN DEEP DOWN THERE

BEGGING FOR SOMEONE TO SEE PAST HIS EXTREMELY BITCHY, MENSTRAL, EMO, HARDCORE, ELEGANT, FRAGILE, INDEPENDENT, ALOOF, ICY, TOUGH-BITCH FACADE? CAN'T YOU?! HE JUST WANTS YOUR LOVE, EVEN IF THAT LOVE HAS TO BE PROVEN BY FORCIBLE SEDUCTION. /SOB

It's just so tragic, it sounds just like a character in a movie I saw once.

[koree]

Well, I forget, BUT ANYWAY, you clearly don't understand the true depth of the riddles of complexities that are Yuna's psyche. You have about as much right to complain as people who can't solve a simple rubix cube. Kindly take your harsh judgements elsewhere now and get out. v_v

[koree]

[hyper_amychao]

UUUUGH. This girl.

I mean, I know my RPing wasn't perfect, but at least I TRIED. She's not even got that going for her.

[pichi]

No one's RPing is perfect. To this day I am constantly using the edit button on my LJ game tags and STILL come back later and find flaws.

HER big problem is that she's an arrogant, obnoxious, self-entitled brat. A hypercritical rant dissecting everything wrong with her posts is the product of that bad attitude, not the quality of the posts in and of themselves. If she'd been sweet OOC, the rant of Day 1 wouldn't exist and we'd either have found something we both liked or we would have parted ways understanding we weren't compatible. Which either way would eliminate the material for a rant of Day 2.

[silverthunder]

Wow, way to project an attitude of, "Yeah, Rasu is there, that's nice, but look at MEEEEE! MEMEMEMEMEME!"

Not that she makes it obvious Yuna is meant to be the OMG CENTER OF ALL or anything. It's clear she doesn't care about anyone else, she is just wanting Rasu as an attentive body and she barely gave two shits about Hitachi.

[pichi]

Yeah, you look at the contents of her posts and it doesn't take long to notice how curiously centric they are around Yuna, even when it's not him she's writing for.

[wafuru]

Okay... Hitachi was bad enough, but that secretary just came flying in out of nowhere land. Does she greet the club guests, too? Does she hand them folders with info about the services, and that details how they are allowed to beat but not rape only one of the "geisha" (but of course all the others are free-game and not quite worth the angst and attention)? Is this just a 9-5 job for her? Geez, if she's going to do the briefing for Hitachi, the least she could do is put the bumbling leader behind a smokescreen and have a little more personality herself, but calling any more attention to her would just threaten Yuna's role as the most attractive thing the building.

...which pretty much means Hitachi could have handed Rasu the folder himself, thus giving him slightly more purpose and not threatening Yuna at all... well, not that he was doing that very well to begin with.

[pichi]

I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT THE SECRETARY IS DOING THERE. For serious. Gangsters have personal secretaries and reception lobbies now? The whole thing just makes no sense. Hitachi handing him a packet and saying "Read it" would have been better than "Ok, you've seen me be utterly pathetic against my own slave, now go get settled, get to know each other, and ask one of the friendly underlings for help if you need it."