Comments | sabine1392: Nunkest Bibendum

sabine1392

Nunkest Bibendum

Jun 09, 2008 21:54

Pairing: Jack/10
Challenge: Intoxication
Rating: PG
Warning: THIS IS WATERED DOWN CRACK. SERIOUSLY. kissing, Donna's dirty mind, and getting smashed. oh, and some language. :O
Spoilers : none, really.
Summary: They went to a planet sized club/bar. But they forgot to bring someone along.

( Where to, first mate Noble? )

ianto, torchwood, doctor who, jack/ten, jack, donna, tw_dw_slashfest, ten, fic

Comments 23

daisybblue June 10 2008, 05:03:40 UTC

That was very cute, though I think you left an italics tag on in the last bit. Drunk!Doctor will never cease to be awesome.

sabine1392 June 10 2008, 05:39:10 UTC

AAH!! thanks for that....

and thanks for the review! :)

iamjabberwok June 10 2008, 05:15:12 UTC

Hee! I love the Doctor's drunkenness... and the localized teleport. I want one.

sabine1392 June 10 2008, 05:41:13 UTC

you could get into a lot of trouble with one of those *waggles eyebrows*

thanks!

angstyteaboy June 10 2008, 05:55:33 UTC

I haven't read a good piece of crack!fic in .... a few years, actually. This one was a great way for me to get back into the genre. Drunk!Doctor is, well, several different kinds of awesome. I do have one question, though. If this was watered-down crack, would full-on crack have made me fall off my chair and not just sent me into a fit of giggles?

sabine1392 June 10 2008, 13:23:55 UTC

i have a feeling that full on crack would hurt you. badly. :(

i call this watered down crack because i really didn't think about writing it before it was done. then, on the final read through, i realized that it was crazy. REALLY crazy.

but not quite crazy enough to earn a FULL crack rating. you'll know when something does. ;)

and thank you for the compliments. i really enjoyed writing this fic!

joolz01 June 10 2008, 11:59:48 UTC

In vino veritus - The Doctor misses Jack! Thanks for the fic

sabine1392 June 10 2008, 13:26:44 UTC

thank you!

*had to look up what in vino veritus was online. is ashamed* yeah. definitely. he keeps it all locked up, so getting drunk gets it all pouring out. :)

shinodabear June 10 2008, 19:53:27 UTC

*G* That was quite enjoyable. Loved Donna to pieces!

sabine1392 June 11 2008, 00:33:04 UTC

i think donna is the best companion since the beginning of the new series. i love that she's not interested in the doctor. XD

thank you!!

shinodabear June 11 2008, 00:45:38 UTC

It's so refreshing, isn't it? (Though I make an exception for Jack. He can pine all he wants. He's Jack.)

sabine1392 June 11 2008, 13:58:09 UTC

i know, and there's no silly little girly stuff from him when he lusts after the Doctor. BECAUSE HE'S A MAN!!

:)