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Chapter 5 anonymous January 30 2008, 02:04:37 UTC
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Re: Chapter 5 unwindingdreams January 30 2008, 04:10:01 UTC
Thank you, Elizabeth! Oh, Lord, that continuity error is so embarrassing. The worst part is, Becky told me to fix it but I was lazy and couldn't spot it right away, so I gave up! Shame, shame on me.

At least Haley's epipheny didn't happen during the drunken stupor, right? Those are a lot less trustworthy! (And yes, the Chad was an intentional naming deal, hee!) Luke and Haley are so protective of each other, trying to shield and protect the other from Nathan's bad behavior that a lot of things might have been even a tiny bit different if they'd shared what they knew. Go figure, right?

Poor Haley. Nathan's just that pesky fly in her ear that won't go away. Like, ever. That boy is there to stay!

Thank you! The next is coming tomorrow evening! :)

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dawnieangel January 30 2008, 06:23:41 UTC
Okay so I'm going to combine a review for 4 & 5 k? Don't hate me ( ... )

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unwindingdreams January 30 2008, 06:50:31 UTC
I could never hate a combo review/reviewer! Anyone who takes the time to leave a note is golden with me!

Thanks, I'm glad that the Peyton/Luke/Haley combo works out. It has the potential to be awkward, and it's kind of cool that they'd keep it so that it wasn't. These Tree Hill people, a little too inbred in how they do everything, including friendships. So convoluted, but isn't that why we love it?

But....but....doesn't Luke get to be the hero for stopping Brooke from taking advantage of dumb, drunk Nathan? Come on, we'll give him a leotard and a little cape, like Underdog or something.

Deb is so bloody awkward, isn't she? She's awkward like someone getting turned down after a public marriage proposal. Just not a comfortable situation to be in.

Which resolve is greater than the other? I think we all know who will win the resolve crown! Yeah, Nathan might not have a leg to stand on in all this considering how he acted, but that won't stop him from trying!

Thanks, I'll post again soon! :)

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