Challenge #13c: Back to Basics Part 3
Title: Back to Basics Part 3
Challenge Type: Story
Further Details: If you participated in Part 1 and Part 2, you now have a story less than 250 words. Your goal now is to pare it down so that your story is between 100-125 words. Go! :)
( Pull out the scissors... )
Challenge Type: Story
Further Details: If you participated in Part 1 and Part 2, you now have a story less than 250 words. Your goal now is to pare it down so that your story is between 100-125 words. Go! :)
( Pull out the scissors... )
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Word Count: 125
Rating: G
Original/Fandom Star Trek Enterprise
Warnings: None
Summary: Distant ripples from a planet's destruction
Link to First Version: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/38199.html#cutid1
Link to Second Version: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/52022.html#cutid1
Link to Final Version: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/72310.html#cutid1
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Word Count: 125
Rating: G
Original/Fandom: original (science fiction, set about 2277)
Pairings (if any): none
Warnings: none
Summary: Telemachus’s first mate has some plans for their stay in dry-dock.
Link to First Version: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/35296.html
Link to Second Version: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/51827.html
Link to Final Version: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/73788.html
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Word Count: 122
Rating: PG
Original/Fandom: Original
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): faint reference to sex changes.
Summary: Chamille, a girl making a change, premature on thought. Though she just wants to be a normal woman, she doesn't think about the side effects of giving her soul to such a man she did.
Link to First Version: http://cierratweek.livejournal.com/8026.html
Link to Second Version: http://cierratweek.livejournal.com/9152.html
Link to Final Version: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/76979.html
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Word Count: 124
Rating: G
Original/Fandom: Original
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): None
Summary: Tick, tock, tick tock. Sixty seconds in a minute, sixty minutes in an hour, twenty four hours in a day, seven days in a week, fifty three weeks in a year, ten years in a decade, ten decades in a century. Tick, tock, tick, tock.
Link to First Version: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/31899.html
Link to Second Version: http://moineau.dreamwidth.org/1344.html
Link to Final Version http://moineau.dreamwidth.org/3906.html
Evil, so evil. I had to get rid of parts I'd gotten attached to :(
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Word Count: 125
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Fandom - Flashpoint
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): none
Summary: There was no way that a little gun shot was going to keep Jules away from the annual picnic. Set during season two when Jules is recovering.
Link to First Version: On AO3
Link to Second Version: At The Bookclub
Link to Final Version At The Bookclub
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Word Count: 124
Rating: R
Original/Fandom: Fringe
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): Femslash
Summary: With nothing to pay her, Olivia Dunham must convince Esther Figglesworth to say with her private eye practice.
Link to First Version: http://lule-bell.livejournal.com/114214.html
Link to Second Version: http://lule-bell.livejournal.com/117071.html
Link to Final Version http://lule-bell.livejournal.com/118015.html
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Word Count: 125
Rating: G
Original/Fandom: Fandom; Melin
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): None
Summary: A whole kingdom, all the gold and treasure in Camelot and the love of all his people but there is something he can never have.
Link to First Version: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/33196.html
Link to Second Version: http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/56970.html
Link to Final Version http://wv-bookclub.livejournal.com/70805.html
(That was so hard, it pysically pained me to cut it down)
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Word Count: 125
Rating: PG
Original/Fandom: Supernatural
Pairings (if any): Ellen Harvelle , Jo Harvelle, Ash
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc.): None
Summary: A night at Harvelle’s Roadhouse
Link to Original: http://riverotter1951.livejournal.com/21183.html
Link to Revised Version: http://riverotter1951.livejournal.com/22758.html
Link to Final Version http://riverotter1951.livejournal.com/24850.html
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Word Count: 120
Rating: PG
Original/Fandom: Harry Potter
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): None
Summary: “Unless you want to sleep outside in the snow,” Tonks continued, “then you will be sharing your room with James.” She patted his cheeks, “he’s not a little kid anymore.”
Link to First Version: HERE
Link to Second Version: HERE
Link to Final Version HERE
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Word Count: 124
Rating: PG
Original/Fandom: Stargate SG-1
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): none
Summary: Some missions don't go as well as you hope but SG-1 has a knack for getting out of trouble by the skin of their teeth.
Link to First Version: http://jennickels.livejournal.com/136879.html
Link to Second Version: http://jennickels.livejournal.com/137588.html
Link to Final Version http://jennickels.livejournal.com/140092.html
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