Himitsu~Chapter 11

[neko_desukara]

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~chap6~+~chap7~+~chap8~+~chap9~+~chap10~

~chap11~chap12~

Comments

[kame_kiyumi]

thanks for this update.... =)

but erm... honestly, I was kinda confused with this chap especially the part where jin and yamapi were conversing... gomen ne...
but by reading till the end, something suddenly wondered in my mind... does jin has a past gf or someone whom leaves a scar in his memory thats why he thought he will bring harm to kame too??

No matter what, thanks for this.. will be waiting for the next update.. i just hope things will be better though... and kame, i hope he will be alright.....

[neko_desukara]

gomen gomen. it's really kind of hard to understand not just the story but the way I had written it^^

i'll do better for the next chapter.
seriously, I'm actually done with this chapter for just 2 days, then I posted it here already.
gotta be back to my normal self. ^__________^

i think jin really has that scar.

[3agroob]

oh... that was unexpected ...

i can't think of a thing of the "WHY?"

thanx for updating..

waiting for the nect chapter

[neko_desukara]

i my self couldn't think yet of anything for that 'why?' hehehe.

thanx for commenting^___________^

[leafypeach]

Kyaaaa~ this chapter = ♥

Eeee, thankyou for sharing~
I can't wait for your next update~

♥

[neko_desukara]

no problem. hope i didn't gave you headache this chapter given me^_____^
at first i didn't really have any idea for what i should write for this chapter...

oh well, gotta move on. i mean this story must move on.

[lilazngrl11794]

they're breaking up?!?! that can't happen :(
*waits for the next chapter*

[neko_desukara]

it's happening and it's breaking my heart.... i wish it was just another dream...

[ryuuki05]

eh??? really sad... full of ansgt,, :( :(

at least, you warned us, hahaha!!1
grabe ah!! ganda!!!! ;)

awesome job!

[neko_desukara]

am i? glad to hear that.

i thought this chapter was kind of 'junk' in a way.
sigh... quite hard to think of a better angst.
i'm not really good writing angst. i knew it.

[ryuuki05]

iie,., your angst is pretty good!! don't worry ne!!*pats*

[neko_desukara]

doumo! that sooths me^______^