toestablishties

HBP Spoilers--Rewrite IMR4MR to fit canon?

43sunsets wrote in toestablishties Jul 18, 2005 17:15

Here's how HBP affects IMR4MR:

( MAJOR HBP Spoilers )

harry, ch 2, ch 1, back story, ch 4, snape

How chapter four fits into the IMR4MR time frame

43sunsets wrote in toestablishties Jun 25, 2005 22:16

silver_sunn101 wrote: I also see how chapter four fits in once reading The Little Prince, but for some reason it seemed to disrupt the flow of the past story. If chapter four was the present, then Snape telling the story about the little prince in chapters two and three would be the past. It just seemed to throw me off a bit. Once getting into chapter five ( Read more... )

ch 4

Backward Beta Chapter 6

43sunsets wrote in toestablishties Jun 22, 2005 14:41

Thanks to why_me_why_not, I finally can formulate what bothers me so much about this chapter: It parallels The Little Prince but does not further the plot of IMR4MR except to show where the relationship of Harry and Snape is going. Too many questions and not enough answers...

Here's the published chapter six, keeping in mind why_me_why_not’s beta-ing comments and suggestions ( Read more... )

ch 6

Backward Beta Chapter Five & Last Nitpick of Chapter Four

43sunsets wrote in toestablishties Jun 02, 2005 13:03

Updated June 19, 2005

Welcome, unicorn13 :-)

Hi all :-)

Here's the published chapter five, keeping in mind why_me_why_not and rea_saint’s beta-ing comments and suggestions.

( Published Chapter Five )

ch 4, ch 5

Backward Beta-ing for Chapter Four

43sunsets wrote in toestablishties May 23, 2005 21:48

Updated May 26, 28, 31, June 15, 18 2005

Most. Revamped. Chapter. Ever. ~_~

Hiya again.

Here's the revised chapter four, keeping in mind rea_saint and nazgul_lady’s beta-ing comments and suggestions. (I've rewritten Snape's description of Tonks)

( Revised Chapter Four )

ch 4

Backward Beta-ing for "Un Chapeau Blanc"

43sunsets wrote in toestablishties May 16, 2005 15:30

Hi all :-)

Welcome, nazgul_lady!

Mwuahahahaha…new user icon *g*
Snow White…snow drop…just can’t resist.

Here's the published “Un Chapeau Blanc,” keeping in mind nazgul_lady’s beta-ing comments and suggestions.
(BTW, I’ve changed one sentence in Chapter three: “So you,” I enunciated slowly, “came from another planet?”)

( Un Chapeau Blanc )

back story

Cold silvery grey eyes - not blue, not blue

43sunsets wrote in toestablishties May 13, 2005 13:46

I just realized that there's no canon information re: Lucius' eye color (or is there?)

Some fanfics have Lucius and Draco look exactly alike except for the hair length. This one fanfic, however, gives Lucius blue eyes.

So...what do you think?
Does Lucius have grey eyes (like Draco) or blue (like Karma)?

While we're at it, is there any canon ( Read more... )

ch 1

100% Punk Sheep

43sunsets wrote in toestablishties May 11, 2005 11:31

Because this is too funny to not be shared.

He looked at it carefully, then he said:
"No. This sheep is already very sickly. Make me another."
So I made another drawing.

Aviator: *draws sheep with tattoos, piercing and mohawk*
Petit Prince: *goggles* "Oo...kayyy..."

Image Link courtesy of arcadiane at learn_french

*skulk off to write "Un Chapeau Blanc"*

Backward beta chapter three

43sunsets wrote in toestablishties May 10, 2005 00:29

Updated May 11, 16, 2005

Hi all :-)

Here's the “published” Chapter three, keeping in mind trixiegogobunny, tabigarasu and rea_saint’s beta-ing comments and suggestions.
(BTW, I’ve changed one sentence in Chapter two: The headmaster had appointed Hogwarts Potions Master, instead of the Deputy Headmistress, to meet a high-ranking French wizard to discuss possible ties between ( Read more... )

ch 3

Mother’s Day

43sunsets wrote in toestablishties May 08, 2005 14:18

Updated May 10, 2005

Have you called/hugged your mother today? :-)

The next update after chapter three will be the promised back-story on Mrs. Snape's descent into madness (for sinick). Chapter four will be posted the week after the back-story ( Read more... )

back story