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Illusions (22/25)

Feb 07, 2007 06:48

Title : Illusions (22/25)
Rating : NC 17
Pairing : Ruki x Kai
Theme : IV - 22 - With tender loving care
Summary : “You haven’t been replying my e-mails”
A/N : Whoooo end is near XD C&C welcomed. This is from Kai's POV! ^^

Past chapters
Chptr 1, 2 , 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 1 8, 19, 20, 21

If anything, it has been weird. Ruki had ( Read more... )

Comments 16

namida_no_uta February 7 2007, 00:02:15 UTC

XDDDDDDDD Ruki beaten up by Miyavi!!!

But it was so cute ;O; I literally AWW'ed here ;OO; ♥ That was just so...lovely ;OOOOOOO;

merumaru February 7 2007, 13:37:28 UTC

haha a little bit cliche ^^;

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merumaru February 7 2007, 13:42:06 UTC

ah. haha yeah.. ^^; my muse was dying on me.. XD

nandedattebayo February 7 2007, 01:04:03 UTC

XDDDDD

Finally a happy chapt *dancing on my chair* XDDDDD

It was cutelovelyadorable <3<3<3<3<3 *bow*

merumaru February 7 2007, 13:42:32 UTC

*dances together*

riya22 February 7 2007, 01:33:02 UTC

hihihihi... it was a very sweet chaptrer ^__^

merumaru February 7 2007, 13:42:59 UTC

glad u think so
haha think enough angst already XD

jrockisgood February 7 2007, 01:43:47 UTC

Wow, this whole fic has just been one looong drawn out thing where the whoole time they were just longing for each other and showing it at different times.
Hm. IS their love superficial? I would have liked a prologue to this, because all they do is kiss.. I wonder how they met and got together and fell in love in stuff. Ah well, I like angst! It just seems a bit superficial :x

Insecurities... something we all struggle with.. :\ I'm glad you wrote about it

I like this ♥

jrockisgood February 7 2007, 01:44:46 UTC

By "all they do is kiss" I meant they only do physical stuff together.. from what's been shown, there's no other aspect to their relationship :(

merumaru February 7 2007, 13:45:05 UTC

Ah.. haha well I guess there are little bit of things they do that shows that they are in it for more than the physical aspects. I always like how love started, where two persons are nervous around each other, slowly growing closer together and then finally being together. But in my mind, there are always insecurities in every relationship, how one can never be totally sure on the feelings on the other side. I thnk in a way, more so for gay relationships since physical@sex is always too big an aspect of it. haha.. anyway XD prologue sounds interesting. XD I might write it after I finish posting this and its spin off up