I use too many commas, and too many extra, silly, words, though, and my writing turns out to be just one long line of a sentence, full of commas, and extra words, not making much sense, but possibly, maybe, making me sound, like an asthmatic, in, a, gasp, sort of, gasp, humourous way, in my essay, my English teacher, Sarah Hoddell, writes "Ha, you
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